Message from @Sprinto

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2021-01-23 05:00:02 UTC  

The things I've written that are cringy to me were cringy at the time. Nothing I've had published bothers me in the least, save one I wish I'd expanded more.

2021-01-23 05:02:32 UTC  

There's just one particular chapter that I wrote that I cringe at but I know I can't rewrite it better

2021-01-23 05:02:46 UTC  

cringe because I don't know how to write romantic scenes

2021-01-23 05:03:30 UTC  

Maybe it's fine, and you're just too close to it.

2021-01-23 05:03:56 UTC  

too close to what?

2021-01-23 05:04:48 UTC  

Emotionally close. There are times when we write stuff that gets to us, but anyone else reading it wouldn't bat an eye at it.

2021-01-23 05:15:29 UTC  

My point is, get someone else to look at it, see if it reads "off" to them. If not, then just keep on going.

2021-01-23 05:18:27 UTC  

I've had one guy read it so far, he hasn't said the scene was cringe

2021-01-23 05:18:55 UTC  

so I haven't changed it much

2021-01-23 05:19:28 UTC  

once I complete my rewrite of the last two chapters, I'll post it here for my fellow writers to eval

2021-01-23 05:24:55 UTC  

"Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of. But do it in private, and wash your hands afterward." - Woodrow W. Smith

2021-01-23 05:39:48 UTC  

why the handwashing lol

2021-01-23 05:43:51 UTC  

The analogy is writing is like masturbating.

2021-01-23 05:44:47 UTC  

The quote is from Heinlein, via one of his characters.

2021-01-23 05:47:03 UTC  

except the product doesn't always go to waste

2021-01-23 06:14:11 UTC  

I thought it was washing dishes ngl

2021-01-23 06:14:15 UTC  

I'm dumb

2021-01-23 06:16:21 UTC  

_sprint

2021-01-23 06:16:21 UTC  

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2021-01-23 06:16:33 UTC  

_join 309

2021-01-23 06:16:33 UTC  

@dastenhero, You have joined with 309 starting words.

2021-01-23 06:17:24 UTC  

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@dastenhero

2021-01-23 06:32:23 UTC  

πŸ…πŸ…πŸ… **TIME'S UP** πŸ…πŸ…πŸ…
Please give your final word count. e.g. `_wc 459` You have 3 minutes.
@dastenhero

2021-01-23 06:33:24 UTC  

_wc 820

2021-01-23 06:33:24 UTC  

@dastenhero, Word count updated: 820 words (511 new)

2021-01-23 06:33:24 UTC  

All word counts are in! Results shortly.

2021-01-23 06:33:39 UTC  

πŸ† **CONGRATS EVERYONE**
`1.` @dastenhero β€” **511 words** (34 wpm)

`_sprint` to start another.

2021-01-23 14:49:58 UTC  

Ah, yes, one of my favorite pastimes, posting questionable quotes from my story with zero context

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/801170162957942885/802550701586251786/image0.png

2021-01-23 14:50:27 UTC  

🀣

2021-01-23 15:01:32 UTC  

_sprint

2021-01-23 15:01:32 UTC  

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2021-01-23 15:01:37 UTC  

_join 67

2021-01-23 15:01:37 UTC  

@KirkpattieCake, You have joined with 67 starting words.

2021-01-23 15:02:32 UTC  

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@KirkpattieCake

2021-01-23 15:06:25 UTC  

_pingme

2021-01-23 15:06:25 UTC  

@Evelyn S. πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡Έ, OK, I will ping you at the start of the next 3 sprints.

2021-01-23 15:17:33 UTC  

🐞🐞🐞 **TIME'S UP** 🐞🐞🐞
Please give your final word count. e.g. `_wc 217` You have 3 minutes.
@KirkpattieCake

2021-01-23 15:18:04 UTC  

_wc 692

2021-01-23 15:18:05 UTC  

@KirkpattieCake, Word count updated: 692 words (625 new)

2021-01-23 15:18:05 UTC  

All word counts are in! Results shortly.

2021-01-23 15:18:20 UTC  

πŸ† **CONGRATS EVERYONE**
`1.` @KirkpattieCake β€” **625 words** (42 wpm)

β€œIf I get stuck, I work on another scene.” β€” Michael Ondaatje