Message from @InsaneCaterpilla
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If you can't say it out loud, don't write it
That's a rather unorthodox way of explaining what I mean and I hope it makes sense
It's so understated that the style of writing is something that matters most... No one will pay attention if they back out after the first few words
It's so important.
You know, men tend to be more concise with this. Give better studies etc. Instead though it's more persuasive to write more personably
yeah, haha
well, I mean I don't know about the generalization, but yeah
You'd benefit from going to a persuasive writing course
Oh I have no interest in that
My pursuasive writing is mostly for the sole benefit of randos on internet forums
Sorry, definitely not trying to be critical as such! I remember I said I respected those who pursued English as a career, perhaps that's only cause I've done so lol
stop worrying about my feelings damnit
Never
Just cause you're a man doesnt mean they're not worthwhile
O-okay, I mean, stop fussing haha, better?
I'm imaging blushes on your cheeks in an anime fashion. So maybe xD
Watching men care about men makes me all warm inside.
Yaoi time? Lmao
😉
Sepuku? Sudoku? Yahtzeee!!!
Those seem to be...very different things
They are!!!!
I'm not even sure yahtzee is Japanese
Noooo.... Sepuku is spilling your own intestines... Sudoku is a game...
@asparkofpyrokravte the only things, you ought do is do something about the beginning and "if you'll allow me, and of course you will" part
Not bloody yahtzee
haha, I remember thinking that was a little corney
but it felt stuffy ivory tower the other way
You wanna know what I find a *really* helpful tactic
Write as if you're talking to a younger brother or sister
Kind yet honest
If you go overboard it sounds condescending. But watch that
thanks
@asparkofpyrokravte are you autistic my friend
I highly doubt it
Your opening sounds as if you are.
ow
Oof, I'm being mean.
But it really does
I think he was trying to write more personal @InsaneCaterpilla