yeah, haha

well, I mean I don't know about the generalization, but yeah

You'd benefit from going to a persuasive writing course

Oh I have no interest in that

My pursuasive writing is mostly for the sole benefit of randos on internet forums

Sorry, definitely not trying to be critical as such! I remember I said I respected those who pursued English as a career, perhaps that's only cause I've done so lol

stop worrying about my feelings damnit

Never

Just cause you're a man doesnt mean they're not worthwhile

O-okay, I mean, stop fussing haha, better?

I'm imaging blushes on your cheeks in an anime fashion. So maybe xD

Watching men care about men makes me all warm inside.

Yaoi time? Lmao

😉

Sepuku? Sudoku? Yahtzeee!!!

Oh good Lord xD

Those seem to be...very different things

They are!!!!

I'm not even sure yahtzee is Japanese

Noooo.... Sepuku is spilling your own intestines... Sudoku is a game...

@asparkofpyrokravte the only things, you ought do is do something about the beginning and "if you'll allow me, and of course you will" part

Not bloody yahtzee

haha, I remember thinking that was a little corney

but it felt stuffy ivory tower the other way

You wanna know what I find a *really* helpful tactic

Write as if you're talking to a younger brother or sister

Kind yet honest

If you go overboard it sounds condescending. But watch that

thanks

@asparkofpyrokravte are you autistic my friend

I highly doubt it

Your opening sounds as if you are.

ow

Oof, I'm being mean.

But it really does

I think he was trying to write more personal @InsaneCaterpilla

A worthy effort. It doesn't work

I feel like a twat

I wanna hide rn

don't worry

@asparkofpyrokravte I believe you're gonna get better at this, as a first attempt it's pretty awesome. But on relating to people, it needs a lot of work. You have to connect with people you write to.