Message from @asparkofpyrokravte
Discord ID: 521691483829436417
You'd benefit from going to a persuasive writing course
Oh I have no interest in that
My pursuasive writing is mostly for the sole benefit of randos on internet forums
Sorry, definitely not trying to be critical as such! I remember I said I respected those who pursued English as a career, perhaps that's only cause I've done so lol
stop worrying about my feelings damnit
Never
Just cause you're a man doesnt mean they're not worthwhile
O-okay, I mean, stop fussing haha, better?
I'm imaging blushes on your cheeks in an anime fashion. So maybe xD
Watching men care about men makes me all warm inside.
Yaoi time? Lmao
😉
Sepuku? Sudoku? Yahtzeee!!!
Oh good Lord xD
Those seem to be...very different things
They are!!!!
I'm not even sure yahtzee is Japanese
Noooo.... Sepuku is spilling your own intestines... Sudoku is a game...
@asparkofpyrokravte the only things, you ought do is do something about the beginning and "if you'll allow me, and of course you will" part
Not bloody yahtzee
but it felt stuffy ivory tower the other way
You wanna know what I find a *really* helpful tactic
Write as if you're talking to a younger brother or sister
Kind yet honest
If you go overboard it sounds condescending. But watch that
thanks
@asparkofpyrokravte are you autistic my friend
I highly doubt it
Your opening sounds as if you are.
ow
Oof, I'm being mean.
But it really does
I think he was trying to write more personal @InsaneCaterpilla
A worthy effort. It doesn't work
I feel like a twat
I wanna hide rn
don't worry
@asparkofpyrokravte I believe you're gonna get better at this, as a first attempt it's pretty awesome. But on relating to people, it needs a lot of work. You have to connect with people you write to.
Please don't publish it as it is
wouldn't imagine it