Oh good Lord xD

Those seem to be...very different things

They are!!!!

I'm not even sure yahtzee is Japanese

Noooo.... Sepuku is spilling your own intestines... Sudoku is a game...

@asparkofpyrokravte the only things, you ought do is do something about the beginning and "if you'll allow me, and of course you will" part

Not bloody yahtzee

haha, I remember thinking that was a little corney

but it felt stuffy ivory tower the other way

You wanna know what I find a *really* helpful tactic

Write as if you're talking to a younger brother or sister

Kind yet honest

If you go overboard it sounds condescending. But watch that

thanks

@asparkofpyrokravte are you autistic my friend

I highly doubt it

Your opening sounds as if you are.

ow

Oof, I'm being mean.

But it really does

I think he was trying to write more personal @InsaneCaterpilla

A worthy effort. It doesn't work

I feel like a twat

I wanna hide rn

don't worry

@asparkofpyrokravte I believe you're gonna get better at this, as a first attempt it's pretty awesome. But on relating to people, it needs a lot of work. You have to connect with people you write to.

Please don't publish it as it is

wouldn't imagine it

Not that I can publish anything atm

Of course you can, why not? Just that you need to consider the audience is all

No, I mean I literally don't have the authority to publish to Hadashi's site

Oh, he didn't?

It's a small enough site it would be weird if he did

given that I'm not helping out with logistics or anything

Of course, it might have something to do with the fact I don't have an account on that site

yet

True I guess. But you are writing an article

Don't give editing privs to writers ^^

...

*shuts up*

I make mistakes. So do others. It's ok to edit