Change the dude's expression more often and use only one brush size so that it looks more authentically ms painty

Your voice is also a bit monotonous and your speech seems to go at the same sort of volume/speed for the duration, with very little exception. I'm also not a giant fan of how you start out focusing on a game while the actual video is more based around the strongholds, and further, it covers the games one at a time; I'd do it based on the strongholds with the games as just things you touch on.

So like, start with something like 'watching a stronghold progress' or 'shop mechanics', and use games that you feel have strong strongholds in those regards to help give the viewer an idea of what you consider to be a really great example, and also to help them get an image of what your ideal stronghold would be like.

https://twitter.com/uglypatch/status/1109503373747716097

@Uglypatch No u

oohhh

Sexy shit you posted

@Orion Are you using an iPod for a mic?

Mu time to kick vee

^^^

I can't believe it.

I literally can't fucking believe it.

I get to kick Vee.

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@Hexidecimark thanks man, that's really useful advice

https://twitter.com/uglypatch/status/1109831392249049097?s=19

https://twitter.com/uglypatch/status/1109832117310021639?s=19

New video premiering now: "Vic Mignogna, Shield Hero." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1LkJBlqiI9M

Are you the writer in The Sun who wrote this article?

@Mu purgy purgy

@Skip Yes... Yes I am 😄

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V5, I have a copy if you wish to read it over, just dm

You're welcome

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Welcomeme

You are also welcome

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Lq_txDz-l4B8DPz9LwvFBEYsLTmnZEFbFjV9eaqIGX8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Wrote me a thing, please roast thx

I don't like reading 'ex-spy' that many times

Ye

Friend told me to change that too

You could substitute other descriptive phrases in

New video "The Baizuo Barrier" premieres in about 30 minutes! Discussing the patterns baizuo follow to suppress and censor what triggers them.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJbpp3J0GHE

what is a baizuo

It's Chinese slang for more or less what we call SJWs

woke

IIRC a more-or-less exact translation is "White Left"

oh i remember thanks

@zero_consequences perhaps a different channel would serve you better, unless you made it.