It was....

I've been doing alot of thinking and I got some of my problems fixed.

It's hard to truly retie a story together, when it was so perfectly tied in the first place. The first thing you must do in order to accomplish that is untie that story to it's deepest layer, after of which when you get a full understanding of it, when you go to retie, differently, you're going to have to get very creative.

Something I didn't quite tie so well in the first volume of my fic

Now I'm brainstorming real good. I'm getting somethings down.

Sorry, in a D&D game playing a kid based on David's Mighty Men. Will be with you guys around 8.

Ah gotta love D&D

TFW you spend 5 hours sat down writing but it’s all just ideas and nothing cohesive for any actual story pieces

Oh well, at least it’s building a world

Sometimes you have to get through fluff to find your story

that's actually my favorite part

I love brainstorming new ideas

my best ideas come at in the middle of night when I'm randomly listening to music.

I've actually had multiple specific moments, written super well because of that. It makes the rest of my writing look shitty in comparison lol

My best ideas come from the use of a certain substance

...Uuh what

Oregano? Table salt? Polonium?

Advil

So, i have a project for graphic imaging. I have to make a movie poster. So I'm sketching down my character and adding the side themes.

Here's the problem. I don't have a story name. Kinda. So the plot is pretty much like Gotham city/our world is now. A city with crime rates high as a kite. Think of Blm and antifa burning cities. It's that.

The name I've found on a generator is "Sinless Society".

I'm not sure if it's a good name but if you have a better idea than I'm open

"As The World Burns".

You know that's true lol

"Judgment"

Hmm. Those names are pretty nice

Sinless City could be pretty fun to play with as a name too since it takes the familiar and contradicts it / contrasts it. The implications that it's called Sinless while the city burns expresses a dismissiveness on what's happening.

We know what Sin City is with Vegas, so what if you took all the worst of it and called it Sinless City? Says a lot about society and a city is a little better sounding imo than society

That's... Actually pretty damn interesting

"Virtuous City" or "Innocent City" could also work if you decide to lean into the concept Kirk was talking about

True true, my DMs are open for more ideas!

Do you care about copyright?

Might as well just do "Arkham City"

I DIDNT RECOGNIZE YOU WITH YOUR DP

<:KEK:795742276549607456> i switched my nickname around 3-4 within one day just another day

Identity crisis?

you can call it that <:KEK:795742276549607456>

miniaturized, this looks like a dude with a fro

It absolutely does.

<:KEK:795742276549607456> i know right

spongebob appropriating black culture

And I like "Sinless city" for all the above reasons and more.
There is also the idea that the moral relativists take where they say "Nothing is true. Everything is permitted."

Because if you take that to its logical conclusion, you can say that there is no such thing as "Sin". Therefore, you have a Sinless society.

Don't tell BLM, Isoboto.

Ahem, not that I agree with the postmodernists, bunch of cultural marxists that they are.

Love this.