Message from @Evelyn S. πΊπΈ
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unique spin, very much yes, that is what I'd do.
I've actually thought of many ideas and how the story would play out, the most violent criminals would be sent to a gladiatorial arena to battle to the death and people could pay to rig the fight giving one person better weapons, the winner if not mortally wounded, could have their sentence renegotiated, different weapons and factions. guns wouldn't be completely useless because they could activate the shield and it would become a stationary solid object and be near unbreakable but they cannot move temporarily for like half a second so some skilled people could use a knife and gun to stun and execute people and other things like that.
mercenaries working for the government, exosuits to enhance strength and utilize large/heavy weapons more effectively but limiting mobility. a lone bounty hunter with a unique energy whip that can disable or make weakpoints in shields, and a revolver to shoot through the damaged parts of the shield.
I've explained more of my ideas to a few people and they like it.
Sounds interesting. Do it up.
the government wouldn't be all controlling, just ruthless and evil. crime would be everywhere. less 1984 and more robocop or judge dredd
ok, thanks
i have many ideas of the world/story, just need to work on specifics like character names and stuff like that.
I have a quick question
I'm writing down the script for my new video and so far, I really like it.
What do you guys think?
Glacierwaif: How about a dieselpunk fantasy world where one corporation makes the decision that they are going to sell a unique product: Freedom. Citizens of said corporate nation pay low taxes, and largely get to choose their quality of life depending on how hard they work. The problem is that none of the corporate citizens wish to fight for their freedom, so the corporation grows trolls in tanks, equips them with automatic weapons, and uses them as battle-fodder. The tale is told from the perspective of one of these vat-grown soldiers.
Who is the targeted audience?
My friends really. My channel is small.
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HAHAHA I was editing instead of writing and apparently I had less words
Nice
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βWrite it so that people hear it and it slides through the brain and goes straight to the heart.β β Maya Angelou
You starting another story?
no, Iβm just working in a new document
i keep jumping around what scenes i write