ok, thanks

i have many ideas of the world/story, just need to work on specifics like character names and stuff like that.

I have a quick question

I'm writing down the script for my new video and so far, I really like it.

What do you guys think?

Glacierwaif: How about a dieselpunk fantasy world where one corporation makes the decision that they are going to sell a unique product: Freedom. Citizens of said corporate nation pay low taxes, and largely get to choose their quality of life depending on how hard they work. The problem is that none of the corporate citizens wish to fight for their freedom, so the corporation grows trolls in tanks, equips them with automatic weapons, and uses them as battle-fodder. The tale is told from the perspective of one of these vat-grown soldiers.

Who is the targeted audience?

My friends really. My channel is small.

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HAHAHA I was editing instead of writing and apparently I had less words

Nice

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“Write it so that people hear it and it slides through the brain and goes straight to the heart.” — Maya Angelou

You starting another story?

no, I’m just working in a new document

i keep jumping around what scenes i write

Ah I see

I do that a lot.

But more in a loose sequential order of major events in the story

When I’m tired of working on the next scene, I work on redoing the beginning. But oftentimes I can’t concentrate if I’m writing between two walls of text so sometimes I create a new document and paste it back in later or I’ll click the enter key fifty million times below it so it seems like there’s nothing below what I’ve written

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