Co writing credits to @One Shot Paddy

Does anyone have any lines from already established songs that you really dig? Like lines that make your skin crawl that we can edit and adapt the message to whatever monstrosities we create?

I'll start by saying "Carolus Rex" by sabaton has a lot of good fucking one liners that make me feel great.
"No man alive or dead commands me, I answer to the Lord" is a great one. Also, I don't remember what song it is from, or who wrote it, but I really love the line "To hell in good company."

The song in hell I’ll be in good company by The Dead South gas great lines

Is anyone good at making lyrics line up with music?

@Bard

He’s probably hung over right now

"Keep your rifle by your side" from Far Cry 5 actually is pretty good

Also he lives on the worst coast

We should totally make something to the tune of Yankee doodle. Return to the roots

@Hellhound6 Hop up in here boi

Ssuuuppp

My country tis of the is never a bad one eithrr

Either*

"ain't I right" is a good beat

I second yankee doodle, I can fuck with a colonial vibe

Swamp Donkey: "Write boogaloo parodies!"
Me hungover as fuck: "Am I a joke to you?"

https://youtu.be/lkfgJG5kyQg

Hey the IRA song loughall martyrs is a great Duncan tribute base

Everybody listen to that song right now and tell me I can't adapt it to Duncan

https://youtu.be/uunquAnq52Q

^I think I could make that work, I have all the time in the world the next few months. Adapting these songs is actually kind of hard and tedious sometimes to have the end result actually sound good

You take the song, get all the lyrics in a word document, put in the chords at their correct places, then go through the songwriting phase of basically taking every single line and reworking it to speak a different narrative. It's sometimes tricky with songs that have a very memorable chorus, in that you either have to surrender the song to be less thorough or find words that sound very similar and hope they have the same impact.

There are a lot of nuances to doing these parodies/adaptations, some are far easier to do than others.

I would be thrilled if other people besides me started doing these

https://youtu.be/aojLR_sszWk

This song is most excellent and I've considered starting working on it

I love Cumberland gap

@Bard It would be cool if you did one for duncan. I am listening to that song right now

It would be even better if, for each verse, we had lines for a different martyr.

It would be helpful to me for you guys to compile a list like that

As an honorary nod to those who weren't as fortunate as us. Could even mention ruby ridge or waco

I'll get some work on it done today

to quote Soap in the mission contingency on MW2 "Make it count these things don't grow on trees"

If these are the same sort of "Firearms charges" that caused ruby ridge, oughta call the song "2 inches of iron"

In Potomac city Maryland, just a day ago, a boy of 21 there got a taste of federal law

His friends online were waitin', for tragedies to find, the boy of olden Maryland had a brand upon his mind

He dared to speak his mind, his thoughts were his crime

There's a great line in too many martyrs were it says "The country gained a killer, and the country lost a man"

so sad

Alright I'm getting fucking amped up right now

I want to rewrite the song, cut the track, do a dub over so the lyrics sound really clear and nice, then put it under a video slide show of Duncan's life with his pictures etc.

Finish that, post it to PWAVE, good to go

A proper tribute, none of this half assed shit

Hell yeah dude, I'll throw it up for you when you get it all set!

you should add in a line at some place that says something about us boys not being afraid to die, because all the boys will meet us in the after life. Cause we all are mad about this.

Ryan Taylor from fb here

ryan Throw up one of your jams

1775 anti tax street ballad “What a Court Hath Old England”. Also, The melody is a very popular old one called “derry down” which would serve well for writing new songs to it

Could only post a small segment of the video but you get the gist

I dig it. I think we gotta have some more shidd to rally behind. Music is, of course, the ultimate bond

Indeed!

@Rustbelt Rover a fellow bard! Welcome friend, and a 12 string man, my kind of dude

Used to have a nice Martin 12 but I sold it for extra money when I went to school

Still regret it

@Bard haha yea its actually a 12 string strung with only 6 strings. I like the wider neck spacing.

That's a Kurt Cobain move right there

Except that fucker stringed a 12 string classical with only 5 strings and did all his demos with that

And still sounded badass

So I make heavy shit. If anyone wants to make some music to roll into battle with, I'm down

thats a stupidly simple beatdown song

I make shit like this too https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fLU_iXioJpY

Sounds good man, if you write something badass I can maybe put lyrics to it

I imagine my song as a country song... Kinda inna style like Big Iron, but also something slightly John R Cash like

THEY CALL ME CHOO CHOO TRAIN
I'M HERE TO BRING THE PAIN
I SHOOT THE FEDS
I MAKE COPS DEAD
BRINGIN' FIRE LIKE THE RAIN

I GOT MY HEAVY 'CHINE GUN
I GOT MY BELT FED
I GOT MY PEW PEW BLASTER
SO GOODBYE YA FUCKIN' FED

I SHOOT THE FEDERAL AGENTS
I SHOOT THE COPS DOWN
GUN THEM HARD
LIKE FUCKIN' DOGS
AND IN THEIR BLOOD, THEY DROWN

why don't we cover black sabbath songs

we already have 1 boogalo song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdmhyEqCINM

fuck it's paddy's day

alright my game plan is to get drunk now and write come out ye multicams

I was born on a broken street where the federal drums did beat

And the lovin Redcoat feet they tramped all over us

And every single night when me bois would come home tight

We'd invite the neighbors outside with this chorus

Come out ye multicams come out and fight me like a man

Show your wife how you butchered kids in Kandahar

Show em how the Boogaloo made you run your asses through

On the dull and dusty streets of Philadelphia

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLq9z3GmD3R9Nr6rQPL-dS8Pwo6QdA7S46

Fable 1 was the best but I respect the submission

fable 2 was a big part of my childhood

after playing it i have kind of a hard time picking up the lost chapters on pc mainly because of the controls

there's a lot more to it than there was for fable 2 and the way the characters, um, are, make it hard for me to get immersed but that's a problem with fable in general

Anyone here like writing hip hop/rap

@RamBull never even tried, it would probably suck

I do it. Same with like punk rock and shit

speaking of punk rock

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k7764y3M_hc