Message from @Indigo
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thanks, I'll do that
That's a question I can ask. I'll use it to fix the double-question.
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As for the title, that is harder
Right now my heading is simply "An Issue of Education", which on a site called menarehuman should be descriptive enough
But it might not be the best
In general practice, it's better to be more descriptive
Yeah, but how does one be more descriptive on what is effectively a rather broad research paper?
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For the two of you, do you have any comments for the end of the article?
I could use a second opinion on that even before the middle stuff is dealt with.
I mean, anyway our sons being at disadvantage is the gist of the paper, right
I suppose I don't think so
The point, I think, is that they aren't fully supported (and are suffering as a result).
Although relative disadvantage is pretty useful when demonstrating that there is a problem, it is difficult when it comes to making the issue matter. Because relative disadvantage doesn't really matter by itself
But at the same time
I don't really have numbers, data on the real impact on boys for any of this.
So perhaps simply being at a disadvantage is all I can make a direct point
Relative disadvantage would had mattered a lot if it was girls that were disadvantaged
Yes, yes it would
Sure
Sorry, I was thinking aloud, the gist of the paper probably ultimately is boys being at a disadvantage
I'm just slightly dissatisfied with stopping there
but also want to keep very grounded in evidence
@asparkofpyrokravte I bet it seems like it's getting ridiculously long to 'get it right'... But it's worth it mate
I'm sorry to have told you that it seems wrong. But you need to know
Buddy, I'm literally asking for it
Doesn't make me not feel bad about it lol. It's like, you know its wrong but dont wanna offend someone who's obviously trying hard!!
Your effort is so worthwhile, I can't really write it for you and please keep on :3
I have finished reading the article
The ending is very good
Only the beginning need some edits
I think mind was cut off, but I got wrapped up in talking about the start
That would depend on the title thogh
For me it ends "boys in the start ..."
That is really weird
I can't even find where that phrase is in the article
I'm sure it's just my useless phone
I can't either
This is the one that never seems to break though, so I keep using it