funny you should mention that, I gave my MC triple the usual reaction time because mutations

and neurological issues

I gave my MC a self-inflicted curse that's more inconvenient than helpful lol

well, neurological issues are also kinda inconvenient - especially when you can't feel emotions because your brain simply doesn't know what that is

Oh yeah that is inconvenient

My MC's curse is like being a werewolf except it's a dragon

Ok this might be a little cliche

can't ever really emphasise with anyone and love is impossible in the traditional sense

ehh, I don't see it as too cliche

dang, that is unfortunate

what's the plothole though

oh, because the other MC has to recognize jackson from somewhere

Yeah

that's...so....cluttered....

must

fix

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She's seen him on a poster promoting the military posing as a sharpshooter

and she's seen him before on a wanted poster

when he first escaped

Dang, so Jackson doesn't even know he has the mana-infused thing

>:c

doesn't need to know jackson's real father because she's just concerned with the bounty, not with the kid's origins

Yeah, around this

He had his memory wiped when he reached the village

It's a decent origin story though

exactly

Wait there is one more thing to the loophole

and although elves live long, she still doesn't need to know who Jackson's father is

idk why but when I think of Jackson I think of Eddie Redmayne but with sideburns

Definitely an interesting origin story though

I'm a sucker for heroes who had their memory wiped and had no idea they were heroes/had a special backstory. I have a story where I use those tropes

bruh I can see that @dastenhero <:KEK:795742276549607456>

Like this big purple jacket that goes down past his knees but with gold trim? idk why but it's the immediate mental picture I got kek

General Luis, one of the the Generals of the elf. They find out from a turncoat about the experiments on people. That will fit into around this also.

I just need a reason for Jackson to be hunted, the bounty is the best I can think of.

If the Empress is his mother, why doesn't she track down her own son?

Or am I missing something?

the experiment was expensive and they want to make use of the expense

He's not actually her son O_O'