So muskets, sabers and cannons

He could've survived

just with no leg

or arm

He can't leave the military though

That's a big part of my story XD

Could he still get honored in the newspaper without leaving the military? Would that work somehow?

The only thing I can think of, is assassinating A high ranking officer

Could Jackson have done that?

So a bounty basically

are we talking about jackson or his dad?

Jackson has a reflexes and great eyesight

Due to magic being infused into him

Is that how all the soldiers are or just him?

He was a test subject

I have to explain this part

Gotcha

funny you should mention that, I gave my MC triple the usual reaction time because mutations

and neurological issues

I gave my MC a self-inflicted curse that's more inconvenient than helpful lol

well, neurological issues are also kinda inconvenient - especially when you can't feel emotions because your brain simply doesn't know what that is

Oh yeah that is inconvenient

My MC's curse is like being a werewolf except it's a dragon

Ok this might be a little cliche

can't ever really emphasise with anyone and love is impossible in the traditional sense

ehh, I don't see it as too cliche

dang, that is unfortunate

what's the plothole though

oh, because the other MC has to recognize jackson from somewhere

Yeah

that's...so....cluttered....

must

fix

[wef.qwef

She's seen him on a poster promoting the military posing as a sharpshooter

and she's seen him before on a wanted poster

when he first escaped

Dang, so Jackson doesn't even know he has the mana-infused thing

>:c

doesn't need to know jackson's real father because she's just concerned with the bounty, not with the kid's origins