Message from @Den Röda Smurfen
Discord ID: 668890053484871739
let me know if you need any more help
Thanks for your help already man
You've been an invaluable asset
@Den Röda Smurfen you still there?
yep
I need another verse translated
From the same
Efter tankens kranka blekhet
River i min trötta själ
Min tid är förbrukad och förverkad
This one
alright
after the thoughts sickly pale
rips through my tired soul
my time is spent and forfeit
the first part is a bit odd
Yeah... maybe its just a weird poetic thing
not sure
"After the sickly pale thoughts"
would make a lot more sense
Sometimes English poetry does that
yeah go with that
Switches the adjectives around
yeah but that sounds good, it was a bit of a problem with river because it translates into so many different things really
but rips through is pretty accurate to the original meaning i'd say
is that all?
For the moment
alright
@Den Röda Smurfen Need more translations
You awake?
yeah but i'm in class right now, i'll be home in i think 4 hours or so
a bit too busy and tired for translations right now if that's ok
yeah thats fine, I can wait
alright man talk to you later
I know this song isn't that good
But eh
Its part of the same album I'm uploading
So I got no choice
