I gave my MC Fear as the last name smh

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Please give your final word count. e.g. `_wc 150` You have 3 minutes.
@dastenhero, @Evelyn S. 🇺🇸, @MofoDoggo

_wc 1795

@Evelyn S. 🇺🇸, Word count updated: 1,795 words (222 new)

_wc 5165

@MofoDoggo, Word count updated: 5,165 words (440 new)

_184

My MC’s last name is Berry lol

_wc 184

@dastenhero, Word count updated: 184 words

All word counts are in! Results shortly.

🏆 **CONGRATS EVERYONE**
`1.` @MofoDoggo — **440 words** (29 wpm)
`2.` @Evelyn S. 🇺🇸 — **222 words** (15 wpm)
`3.` @dastenhero — **184 words** (12 wpm)
Combined word count: 846 words over 15 minutes.

“You may be able to take a break from writing, but you won't be able to take a break from being a writer.” — Steven Leigh

Nice job!

So does anyone want to read what I have? 👉 👈

~~I'm still writing the same scene from the last three sprints I've done~~

Yes!~

Sure!

Just don't mind the writing style

Not the best with how I write

Think about it from a plot style

Be honest though

Hold on; I'll post mine as well

I think I have it just about finished as far as a first rough draft goes

Do post, I want to see what others are like

It's really rough. I'm also toying between having these kids be older or having them be actual children. I just don't want it to be creepy - they're far too young for any serious romantic shenanigans.

I want it to be more in line with the "romance" Tom Sawyer has with the girl behind the schoolhouse - they don't understand it and are simply pretending. Innocence is key.

(bad example but the best I can come up with)

It's also a children's story where magic is a thing

Nice, are you writing this in the terms of like a "plau"

Or movie

As it looks similar to a script

Film! It is, lol. Done with Trelby.

I'll post the *very* beginning part of my story. So far I have 146 pages written and am in the process of almost completely redoing the beginning

*Also - these kids are part of a circus. He's a magician and she's a clown. Sort of.*

What did you guys think of mine though?

It does look very cool!

I'm reading part of it

Also, MofoDoggo, I was able to read yours. I like the worldbuilding. I like all the different fantasy races and I think it gives off a DnD feel (although I've only played DnD a few times so maybe I don't know what I'm talking about) but I like that, and I'm a real sucker for fantasy.

However, I don

Sorry, not finished