banished from...?

it seems like adding power to a demigod basically makes a god

The so called "Heaven realms"

the mana experiment would be permanent... oh you mean that

right, but that still gives you extra strength and longer life

I honestly don't know how to describe this better $_$

I mean, Achilles was a demigod

Oop, I made a mistake!

The father slept with a Demon like goddess.

It relates to later in the book

can he then get infernal powers

summon bats and shit

No, the rule still applies

or increase the risk of a certain disease

maybe the mana experiment brings that out...

So there are 10 main gods/goddess, 10 main demons

The mana experiment is like a blood infusion basically

I might need to work on this part a little more

#_#

Still a lot of vagueness

Try just writing all of this out. I've found with my stories with complicated magical systems/lore that writing out all the pros, cons, and aspects to them can really help you understand them and what they can and can't do and then when you are actually writing you don't have to figure it out

~~i still need to do that for one of my stories~~

One more sprint than

I need to finish this part

I'm down!

Anyone else, join on in.

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@Evelyn S. 🇺🇸, Word count updated: 3,516 words (435 new)

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close race O_O

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Nice job