Oh

I mean, you wouldn't need revenge if the dude wasn't a monster, right?

Couldn’t find open office on iOS but got office suite

Alrighty, lemme see what I can do, here.

I was being lazy, I really hate having to deal with *Word*.

im working on mah thing

as in i actually started writing

I am downloading word too

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Wait, you don't have word...what do you have?

Well actually, in my story the guy he get's revenge on isn't really a monster.

Well defining monsters differently

Sorry, I’m back, had to change my chicks’ water

Bebees!

Sorry.

I got word on my phone

And it all works

nah, you’re good. They’re adorable. I’ll post pics in <#801170143849742396> later

But thanks for all the feedback

I’m trying to find a good balance with Meredith and Dylan’s relationship, I don’t want Meredith to be too trusting, but I want her to want to get to know Dylan better even though she knows he’s obviously hiding something

Imma sprint

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There, my story converted to word

I don’t have time to sprint, but I wish y’all luck!

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Hmm... maybe I could make Meredith embody the “keep your friends close but your enemies closer” rather than being so outright trusting of Dylan

Well, and as the story went on, it became a little bit more believable. Maybe it's just me, I know I have a terrible time when I feel that people aren't being honest with me.

There's an interesting quote, I can't remember who said it:
*A lie is nothing more than a betrayal in it's infancy.*

Ooo I like that

Hold on, I have a whole piece devoted solely to the psychology behind that statement.

Libre Office does Word files, and it's free.

I guess... I want it to come across that Dylan isn’t outright *lying* to Meredith, but he’s withholding information from her. I want Meredith to realize it but not get too annoyed at him because they literally just met and she doesn’t like telling strangers her whole life’s story either

Urg... the beginning is so hard

the plot moves easier once they’re friends

I think her relationship with Dylan could be a good plot point as it is now. The only thing I would warn about is having Dylan not know anything

Interesting piece of fiction you’ve written. I like that you base it off of people from today