Message from @Arrow
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just finished an anti-israel article for the young americans for freedom newspaper
Bububububububbububububut Israel is the freest nation in the moodle eest
i think its pretty good
everything wrong with israel condensed into a page and a half
Is that even possible??? (fitting it onto a page and a half)
(I don't even care if Israel exists, and don't think it's the cause of all our problems, but there's still a lot wrong with it)
here it is
tell me if i missed anything lol
AMERICA FIRST
NOT ISRAEL FIRST
I like the title, one minute, Ima read this, respond, then go to bed
cool and thanks
i cant take any Israel critique seriously if it mentions illegal settlementes
I need more idf women in my collection
I cant take any israel critique seriously when the women look like they do
What's wrong with mentioning illegal settlements
its leftist terminology
also part and parcel of nation building
It's like if Mexico built illegal settlements in Texas
>if
I'm actually an English tutor at college (despite being a Computer Science major, a history professor recommended me and so here I am; easy hours and pays well, I hate it though)- point being, I hope my criticism is helpful; don't take it too personally.
"Despite that, his fellow Republicans and conservatives often seem to have an interest in protecting a foreign nation ahead of their own—no, Democrats, not Russia."
Much as I like this sentence, it's like 20% awkward; if possible, I'd use parenthesis instead of the end dash.
"Our foreign policy is awfully Israel focused"
I'd reword this.
Final sentence is good but I don't like the dash there either
Anyway, it's all good as an intro piece, and is legitimate. Uses some normie terms (and avoids some of the more controversial topics like the USS Liberty), but it's not supposed to be a full-redpilled article I suppose.
yeah and if you were a turkoman and got all bent out of shape about it you would look retarded
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BEWARE THE KHAZAK MILKERS, THEY ARE SMELLY AND WILL RAISE YOUR KIDS GAY
damn those perfidious mexicans and their illegal settlements in the north bank
Thanks buddy I will fix
i unironicly love and want to marry beauitiful isreali girls
like Natalie portman?
What is it with the Catholics here and wanting to have Jewish kids
Like
They will cut their dicks off guys
Maybe if youre a fag
Stay away from milkers
extacly
why is the communist pagan huey long still here
And let your women make decisions for you
I will fark HARD on a Jewish woman and have a dozen kids
To #own you