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This script is going to be whack
You *what*
sound F U N
The script revolves around a Japanese song called Cendrillon made for Hatsune Miku and Kaito
That is fine I like anime
Me and some friends were making a fan project that didn't go through because *cough* I never finished the script
Sorry I am working and I get calls
(online friends)
If I quit chatting that is why.
oof. we shouldn't distract you then
I came here LOL
LOL
I took lots of liberties though and the only remaining idea from the original is a ball where the princess assassinates the prince
Or tries to
hatsune Miku & kaito are two names i haven't heard in a long time. brings back memories
This man really be on D i s c o r d during work hours lmfao
Right?
~~me when lectures came on~~
Honestly *same*
My main character is targeted by a msm person because he goes by the name Captain Crusader. The guy accuses him of being Islamophobic
I rewrote the fairy godmother into a Maleficent type character paired with Bellatrix's looks and insanity and a bit of Mother Gothel
She promises a cure for Ella's sisters in exchange for Ella assasinating the prince. She also adds fuel to the fire by lying and saying that the royal family has a cure but is keeping it to themselves.
Reality - literally everyone has the plague. They began the ball as a way to have fun before everyone dies.
There is no cure because it's the godmother's plague to begin with
Still working out why she would have enough power to literally start a plague and not enough to assassinate the royal family herself but
Maybe give her a reason to have to keep the family alive?
They have something of value to her?
That's true
Overall that sounds awesome-something I’d read <:salut:730846445732888630>
Aw, thank you 😂
or: don't be an original and just let nature does the deed <:thinking:726878987837636698>
I didn't really write a full on plague until after COVID and lockdowns made me realize the ball is a plothole last night so it's still pretty sloppy writing at this point
Oh yeah that’s true
Its hard to make it not COVID tbh
Get some ideas, start with a setting, and a plot. Characterization + Plot is good, but don't 100% make the plot about a specific Character.
Unless the witch made the plague so they don’t realize they have until they suddenly die
Oh you’re right. Thanks for that!
Ironically, it's not about the plague, it's about evil people tricking poor people into resenting the upper class
Do some outlines
Put your face to the paper...or the screen wherever you write until words come out of brain