yo can someone proofread a short paragraph for me

that roosters chinflaps look like a deflated ballsack

@Lynxoid k send dm

nvm

is the sentence "like gods, if not by name" grammatically correct?

yes

aha!

good!!!

I hope this is for course work and you're not asking us to proofread 4chan arguments

writing scifi bullshit

>getting into 4chan arguments

>writing scifi

even worse dude

Do not bulli creative pursuits!

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@Lynxoid grammatically correct, but it sounds weird. depending on the context, i would jot an "only" in

no, that would be the contrary to what I would be trying to communicate

i'd prob write like gods, if but not by name

same thing tho

indentical to gods, but called differently. so "like gods, if only by name" wouldn't work, right?

like gods, only not by name mmhhh sounds weird too

well yeah forget what i said

Actually I just scrapped the whole thing and started over

and I think you will agree

but "as the closest thing a species had ever come to being Gods." sounds way cooler

man the kindle app on android is so good

How so?

it just works i guesas lol

the dictonary thing is useful too

Ever try other e reader apps?

not rly

Avoid "thing" in writing

Main draw back is they dint suppirt dual screen most times

Your readers will thank me

You don't even need it there. Just 'closest' is fine.

A better way of writing previous excerpt was, "identical to gods in all but name."

oh that was nice

thanks

Np.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CqaAs_3azSs

*farts*