Message from @Lynxoid
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i think it was cause when it came out for the gameboy color it was like the first time someone did something like that
yo can someone proofread a short paragraph for me
that roosters chinflaps look like a deflated ballsack
nvm
is the sentence "like gods, if not by name" grammatically correct?
yes
aha!
good!!!
I hope this is for course work and you're not asking us to proofread 4chan arguments
writing scifi bullshit
>getting into 4chan arguments
>writing scifi
even worse dude
Do not bulli creative pursuits!
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@Lynxoid grammatically correct, but it sounds weird. depending on the context, i would jot an "only" in
no, that would be the contrary to what I would be trying to communicate
i'd prob write like gods, if but not by name
same thing tho
like gods, only not by name mmhhh sounds weird too
well yeah forget what i said
Actually I just scrapped the whole thing and started over
and I think you will agree
but "as the closest thing a species had ever come to being Gods." sounds way cooler
man the kindle app on android is so good
How so?
it just works i guesas lol
the dictonary thing is useful too
Ever try other e reader apps?
not rly
Avoid "thing" in writing
Main draw back is they dint suppirt dual screen most times
Your readers will thank me
You don't even need it there. Just 'closest' is fine.
A better way of writing previous excerpt was, "identical to gods in all but name."
oh that was nice
thanks
Np.