Message from @fallen angel
Discord ID: 602744294444367883
gay
the entire genre of music that you tie yourself in is bad and sucks and is stupid and dumb
tastelet :/
you don’t even know what music i write shithead
you think I was talking to you
yeah pooface
you fucking slackjawwed retard
what about it
huh?
fuck you, may you and your children be cursed with impotence
already am bucko
life will get easier later in life friend
😦
ok shitposting aside polyphonic sound mass composition is fucking cool and i’m probably going to write more for it. i’ve only worked on a string quartet and part of a solo piano work but i may write one for chamber orchestra later on.
can you even spell polyphonic?
i just did
I... dont get it...
dont worry you will when i’m considered the arnold schoenberg of the 21st century 😎
here's some gay shit I wrote a while back https://soundcloud.com/dongs/string-quartet-movement-3
one of the songs on my next album
mp3? nah
those are for discord
8 mb limit
get discord nitro so you can post your music in DSD256
😎
not giving discord money
Inspired by Big Clyde
@Dong your harmonic progression is kinda janky and meandering. parts that aren't very interesting get repeated. also the rhythm alternates between being straight and jarring, it's never quite graceful enough to fit the implied harmonic connotation.
basically it sounds like you had a rhythmic idea and wrote some generic progression to go with it
timbre wise it's also really monotonous, you need dynamic and/or tempo shifts to make things interesting. unless you have a damn good harmony or melody you need things to sound expressive instead of robotic.
>basically it sounds like you had a rhythmic idea and wrote some generic progression to go with it
this is what I do a lot of the time , just come up with a rhythmic idea and then do voice leading around it
how can I transition better from straight to jarring? any good pieces that are an example of that?
it's not so much the straight to jarring that's the issue as it is the melody you've written around it that doesn't make sense
there needs to be some level of synergy between the two and that's missing here
also generally speaking for polyrhythms i wouldn't advise writing them for strings. they're not quite rhythmic enough for the rhythm to come across well. look into 60's minimalism for some ideas for what kinds of ensembles work well with rhythmic stuff.
yeah, I'm just working with vst instruments and basing what I do on the sound I get out of them
I realize it may not transfer well to actual playing
at least at that speed
yeah the real pain in the ass with writing music from a composer's POV is making it actually easy to play for the performer