ok shitposting aside polyphonic sound mass composition is fucking cool and i’m probably going to write more for it. i’ve only worked on a string quartet and part of a solo piano work but i may write one for chamber orchestra later on.
@Dong your harmonic progression is kinda janky and meandering. parts that aren't very interesting get repeated. also the rhythm alternates between being straight and jarring, it's never quite graceful enough to fit the implied harmonic connotation.
timbre wise it's also really monotonous, you need dynamic and/or tempo shifts to make things interesting. unless you have a damn good harmony or melody you need things to sound expressive instead of robotic.
>basically it sounds like you had a rhythmic idea and wrote some generic progression to go with it
this is what I do a lot of the time , just come up with a rhythmic idea and then do voice leading around it
