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lol

What's the little girl complaining about

So what's everyone up to today?

When you think about it

Egg is just chicken period

im supposed to do things buuuuuuut dont feel like it

so just sitting here

Those my oc sound like a Mary sue?
●he is gay
●he is an albino
●he is rich
●he is italian
●has 4 adopted Children and a Husband
●he is a superhero
●He is sassy and Sarcastic but also a sweet person
●good father

Chicken herpies

yes

Yeah

Mary sue

What are his flaws

he is literally batman with superpowers and children

Add flaws

Hes a good father but every year makes them participate in a fight club

Dont do that

Lao is a silly person lol

^

Or the 4 children he adopted were adopted illegally

Flaws tend to make a character more then any good attributes. As every person is flawed and deals with shit going through any bit of life. A flaw can be very humanizing and important. Just look at characters like "Light" from say death note, or L from the same series. One of the very few anime I enjoy. Their flaws define them more then anything else.

One of them can be Madeline McCann

●had an abusive father
●mother committed suicide
●his cousin Richard and aunt Beatrice lives with him and dont know that he is a superhero

^ yes, And what you should have them have flaws that go along with their character

Well how would those flaws effect him as a person. Perhaps an aversion to suicide, a distrust or fear of people, and then having to constantly hide and worry about his identity. If done right they can make the character deep and interesting. And off the top of my head, those are what I'd assign as a result of those three things.

Make him a superhero like the punisher

He fucking murders Jay walkers or some shit

^ No, I know a system that can help you with sort of thing! Try the "hero system"

K

Or give him an interesting backstory

@Lao I'm working on that

The reason hes a superhero is because he made a big mistake in his past

And hes trying to rectify it

I wouldn't consider the punisher a hero, he's more of a bad guy that is bad to other bad guys.

Yeah no shit

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A superhero probably wouldn't just kill people, bad or not. Typically not a hero action.

Now I want to watch the punisher movie. Sigh.

Punisher good guy

Spiderman has assblasted people before