Message from @Shattered

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2019-11-17 14:30:55 UTC  

what if

2019-11-17 14:31:00 UTC  

the yolk is the actual egg

2019-11-17 14:31:14 UTC  

and the white part is just cum that gives life

2019-11-17 14:31:30 UTC  

what if humans could lay eggs

2019-11-17 14:32:07 UTC  

Also, old AF youtube lol apparently.

2019-11-17 14:32:33 UTC  

Lol

2019-11-17 14:32:57 UTC  

We need an update onthat video

2019-11-17 14:33:01 UTC  

Bad Trap, like I said you're fine. But I am waiting for the FBI to show up at my door.

2019-11-17 14:33:02 UTC  

Bigger nest, bigger gun.

2019-11-17 14:33:10 UTC  

So. Maybe not the best person to judge.

2019-11-17 14:34:28 UTC  

fine isnt good enough for my standards

2019-11-17 14:34:31 UTC  

i wanna be great

2019-11-17 14:35:51 UTC  

k

2019-11-17 14:35:51 UTC  

lol

2019-11-17 14:38:53 UTC  

What's the little girl complaining about

2019-11-17 14:39:33 UTC  

So what's everyone up to today?

2019-11-17 14:39:37 UTC  

When you think about it

2019-11-17 14:39:41 UTC  

Egg is just chicken period

2019-11-17 14:40:00 UTC  

im supposed to do things buuuuuuut dont feel like it

2019-11-17 14:40:05 UTC  

so just sitting here

2019-11-17 14:40:07 UTC  

Those my oc sound like a Mary sue?
●he is gay
●he is an albino
●he is rich
●he is italian
●has 4 adopted Children and a Husband
●he is a superhero
●He is sassy and Sarcastic but also a sweet person
●good father

2019-11-17 14:40:19 UTC  

Chicken herpies

2019-11-17 14:40:22 UTC  

yes

2019-11-17 14:40:36 UTC  

Yeah

2019-11-17 14:40:38 UTC  

Mary sue

2019-11-17 14:40:45 UTC  

What are his flaws

2019-11-17 14:40:56 UTC  

he is literally batman with superpowers and children

2019-11-17 14:41:00 UTC  

Add flaws

2019-11-17 14:41:13 UTC  

Hes a good father but every year makes them participate in a fight club

2019-11-17 14:41:21 UTC  

Dont do that

2019-11-17 14:41:50 UTC  

Lao is a silly person lol

2019-11-17 14:42:06 UTC  

^

2019-11-17 14:42:12 UTC  

Or the 4 children he adopted were adopted illegally

2019-11-17 14:42:39 UTC  

Flaws tend to make a character more then any good attributes. As every person is flawed and deals with shit going through any bit of life. A flaw can be very humanizing and important. Just look at characters like "Light" from say death note, or L from the same series. One of the very few anime I enjoy. Their flaws define them more then anything else.

2019-11-17 14:42:41 UTC  

One of them can be Madeline McCann

2019-11-17 14:43:01 UTC  

●had an abusive father
●mother committed suicide
●his cousin Richard and aunt Beatrice lives with him and dont know that he is a superhero

2019-11-17 14:43:08 UTC  

^ yes, And what you should have them have flaws that go along with their character

2019-11-17 14:44:23 UTC  

Well how would those flaws effect him as a person. Perhaps an aversion to suicide, a distrust or fear of people, and then having to constantly hide and worry about his identity. If done right they can make the character deep and interesting. And off the top of my head, those are what I'd assign as a result of those three things.

2019-11-17 14:46:04 UTC  

Make him a superhero like the punisher

2019-11-17 14:46:17 UTC  

He fucking murders Jay walkers or some shit