@Bloodmasked Why isn't she signing those with her real name.

the main character is a prick first of all

are u homosexual or something

he's a self insert mary sue with no personality

all he does is ramble about how his life sucks or that the government is bad

do u prefer characters that are bland

it's like the angst from the hunger games on steroids

I prefer characters with actual personality

how is his personality not actual

and equality does not have any

what is he like as a person?

ayn rand

vaguely rebellious, angsty as all hell, prone to staring at women

aka not gay

so

I would push him into a gutter if I saw him on the street

so ur white knight and cucked soy boy beta male

and he sees this woman standing in a field and just instantly decides that he's in love

and when he tells her, the reaction is basically "oh okay"

yes

I've seen more emotion in a brick wall

what is alternative

some actual feeling to it

a CONFESSION of love instead of just a statement

sounds cringe tho

is he nervous?
did she feel the same way towards him?

we don't know

bro its not an anime

people have personalities

his personality is fuck commies get shit done

then he's flat

paper thin personality

one note character

what is better character

what spurs his rebellion?

what are his values?

its pretty obvious

the pursuit of happiness is his value and hes rebelling against commie cucks

what makes him happy?

living

does he have hobbies? interests? anything?