I like I like

Look up "Grimalkin" in scottish legend.

Wait, fuck that. Keep your grubby paws off it, I need that for my story!

Lol

God damn it.

So I can't use anything political in my project.

So now I'm stuck again, Gonna few to think-

how do I write a response paper to a book

What do you mean?

You want the outline I use when I'm stuck?

or need guidance*

This is just a template to help organize thoughts into categories.

guidance

I can answer the question posed with 2 sentences

but ofc it has to be a 3-5 paragraph response

Reminds me of how much I hated Jr High literature class

Had to read The Giver ( I hated that book). I actually never read more than like the first two chapters because I had 0 interest, but we were only tested on it once.

I aced it because the essay was about Eugenics and how or how wasn’t it being practiced in the book and I’d seen pretty early I that they obviously were. I BS’d that essay and got a 90 by writing about real world uses of Eugenics in modern science.

Idk why that teacher gave me such a high score.

that's me in any writing class outside of creating writing

even then...

"White claws"

Are there rules on what you can talk about? Just talk in detail about what you liked and/or didn't like and what did or did not make logical sense in the story?

not really, just have to have a couple quotes but the digital copy I got has all the pages screwed up

Anybody know of a good word that basically means "without structure"? I was thinking about "chaos" but I want something more intense
in my story there's a movement against thinking for yourself and being creative and I need a good buzzword for it that has extremely negative connotations

idk how you can get more intense than chaos

armageddon maybe?

@Evelyn S. 🇺🇸

The issue is that it's a fantasy world, so they wouldn't call it armageddon. I was thinking "pro-turmoil, anti-stability" stuff like that. But maybe chaos will be the main thing. But I appreciate the suggestion

@Evelyn S. 🇺🇸 If you could give me an idea of how you wish to use the word (like in a sentence) I could probably help you. My family always jokes that I'm a walking thesaurus.

it's a word that can exist regardless of the world, as long as they know english

maybe they made up their own equivalent in whatever language they use

@Evelyn S. 🇺🇸 from what you've described so far I'd try out "inchoate" it means formless

"What, you don't support Goldenrod City's new law that will help traders organize themselves better [controlling how they sell]? What are you, pro-[buzzword]?"

I'll consider that

@Evelyn S. 🇺🇸 I write stories too and there is a really good online thesaurus I used to use. I don't know if it's allowable to share here. If it's not you can always message me for the link, I think it's still in my favorites somewhere.

Why wouldn't it be allowed to share it here?

Some discord rooms they don't want you to share outside links and I am new here so not sure if I would get into difficulties by doing so.

I will share it. Moderators please remove if not allowed with my sincerest apologies. https://www.powerthesaurus.org/amorphous/synonyms

there's nothing about it in the rules as long as it's SFW and not illegal, so...