thanks! I wanted to put a spin on “person from our world gets trapped in another world” except the person has been there for awhile and he’s not even the main protagonist

although i do realize it’s a little confusing how long he’s been there given his dialogue

Okay, I see what you’re saying

Absolutely. I'm glad that there are people who can formulate words better than I can in this chat.

He probably does have ADHD, to be honest

That was aimed at Trow but the same thing applies to your story too

😂

Ohhhh that’s awkward

Don’t mind me, putting up the shame curtains

😂 you want to read my story? I’m sure it will help you feel less shame

As you ridicule my writing

It wasn't too hard to read. I'm glad I read it overall.

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Yours was the one with the werewolves, right? I read it this morning

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Wow the werewolves, secondary characters stand out more than the main character 😞

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Imma have to fix that

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`1.` @MofoDoggo — **347 words** (23 wpm)

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Wiener!

What is the objective of this contest

To type

Lol, it just seemed like the shortest way to describe it. I guess I could have mentioned the color dark red

Ey you got it

Oh, it’s been 15 minutes. I guess I could have joined the sprint, lol

I’m going to cringe when I read my story again

Don't.

Don't cringe.

I enjoyed your story a lot. It was more difficult to read on Discord because the formatting goes wonky, and there was a lot of repetition, but I’m enjoying the story

I have to change so many sentences, too many times I say "would"

I will

Would is not a bad word.

It is if you use it repeatedly

In fact, I would say the word is dang near necessary.

Hopefully the repetition serves a purpose

What would you use diferently?

Could

Except the words are not always interchangable.

I would (heh heh, see what i did there?) not worry about word choice at this stage of writing, focus on the story