Message from @dastenhero

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2021-01-05 03:54:03 UTC  

Tbh it feels like someone just went wild on imagination and went "screw real life rules" and it works

2021-01-05 03:54:23 UTC  

It also establishes that the world is different from ours in the very beginning

2021-01-05 03:54:51 UTC  

It's sort of like how Big Hero 6 just feels normal because you accept the concept from the start. Not quite that drastic but

2021-01-05 03:55:34 UTC  

Which in a fantastical world like that, it has to feel realistic, but let you know that its just a little different, it helps with worldbuilding and letting the reader, or watcher follow along

2021-01-05 03:55:39 UTC  

^

2021-01-05 03:56:59 UTC  

Horrible example, but even movies like Cats did this well to a certain extent. It just grabs you, creeps you out from the get-go, and basically says "get over it, this is how we roll." Never really ends up making sense but ironically, the designs are the least of the movie's worries past the first ten minutes because everyone brave enough to still be there has accepted the reality

2021-01-05 03:57:33 UTC  

Its a good example,of worldbuilding, even if the world kinda sucks

2021-01-05 03:57:37 UTC  

^

2021-01-05 03:57:59 UTC  

It *does* make the mistake of introducing new elements later though

2021-01-05 03:58:06 UTC  

It bring the viewer in quickly, if they are on board, then they'll love it, you cant try to please everyone

2021-01-05 03:58:25 UTC  

Well, it is a hollywood flick in the end

2021-01-05 03:58:28 UTC  

That's one thing that bugged me about the new Wonder Woman; they bring up important plot points 4/7 into the movie

2021-01-05 03:58:54 UTC  

(to be honest I couldn't keep track of the acts so I'm estimating how far at this point)

2021-01-05 03:58:57 UTC  

Ive heard mixed things, potholes are the worst and this seems full of them

2021-01-05 03:59:06 UTC  

It is full of them

2021-01-05 03:59:28 UTC  

But it also doesn't explain or even introduce important concepts within the first half hour

2021-01-05 03:59:49 UTC  

Like suddenly a weapon will do a new thing and it was never even hinted at

2021-01-05 03:59:54 UTC  

(I won't spoil)

2021-01-05 03:59:54 UTC  

When writing, do your best to limit plotholes, or intentionally leave them so,you could maybe write about it later, fill it in, but have a plan for them

2021-01-05 04:00:00 UTC  

^

2021-01-05 04:00:14 UTC  

And definitely explain crap at the beginning. I learned that from college luckily

2021-01-05 04:00:33 UTC  

Exposition is boring however, you want to keep it interesting

2021-01-05 04:00:37 UTC  

It was really kind of sad seeing such an expensive movie pull stuff out of a hat

2021-01-05 04:00:39 UTC  

Oh, definitely

2021-01-05 04:00:51 UTC  

But at least hint at certain things

2021-01-05 04:01:31 UTC  

Once again Rick Riordan was really good at introducing everyone to his world of the gods, without it just being boring Exposition

2021-01-05 04:01:37 UTC  

^

2021-01-05 04:02:11 UTC  

Humor tends to help if you cant actually find ways to make it work

2021-01-05 04:02:22 UTC  

I don't remember much of Percy Jackson but I never went "what the heck" to my knowledge

2021-01-05 04:02:27 UTC  

Its a copout but it can work if done right

2021-01-05 04:02:31 UTC  

True

2021-01-05 04:03:13 UTC  

I was big into Greek Mythos at the time so it was really interesting to me as a kid, so i read it multiple times, still do sometimes

2021-01-05 04:03:29 UTC  

I need to reread it

2021-01-05 04:04:30 UTC  

Its aged a bit I think, but it still hits in all the right places with good worldbuilding, setting up long term character growth, plot holes to fill, and some pretty clever humor

2021-01-05 04:14:55 UTC  

That's good!

2021-01-05 14:03:36 UTC  

seems like you guys had quite the conversation while I was gone 😄

2021-01-05 14:04:23 UTC  

Yeah

2021-01-05 20:16:04 UTC  

I accidentaly Muted this channel, how do I unmute it?

2021-01-05 20:20:15 UTC  

nevermind

2021-01-05 22:54:47 UTC  

Another story idea I had was about a group of American Paladins.

2021-01-05 22:55:04 UTC  

They are an order of Holy knights who first came to be before the Revolution.