Message from @Hackata48
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hm, sisters of battle from WH40k are pretty based
think on that
Details pls
celibate, purge heretics with holy flames... etc
Well for my story the female Protagonist is a Squad Leader fresh out of Officer School
One thing I can recommend when writing women is don't make her gender a focus point. writers that make them that way are limit the characters.
on the left they will often refuse to make the character look weak to keep up the idea. You character's must be PEOPLE first and women second @Hackata48
Whew! Now that you mentioned it, I never really emphasised my character's gender that much
Tends to be a bit No Nonsense though
have her have a strong sense of morality
not so emotional
and she listens to the advice of an older man who is techninally lower rank than her
She is a Lieutenant while the Older man is a Sarge
Don't make her does things just because she's a women.
but what would make her based... HM
probably giving up her career and being a house wife
@Hackata48
I got two women in my story I write. One is a spy master working behind the scenes and the other is a scared girl who's to powerful for her own good. and doesn't want to be a hero and is trying to get rid of that power. mix up character types for interesting results
The actor Avery Brooks (Sisko from Star Trek DS9) said it best.
If you write a story about a brown man, he'll wake up and say "What brown man thing will I do today" you need to think of the character as a man first. skin color is trivial in comparison.
Same goes for women.
That'd be pretty based @Deleted User
If its okay with everyone here, Can I post my Wattpadd Story in this Discord Server?
lol @Deleted User one of my characters is Black. A Nigerian Engineer
their pretty based if I recall from the news
family based
I know I Nigerian. They generally are
and some of the famous ones got accepted to ALL Ivy Leagues
He is pretty based.
listening to him argue with African Americans is amazing
You're not Africans... you're Americans. He said as two black guys were talking black panther. Boy did they get angry 😄
The culture you have is sickening to africa, no wonder people hate you. you behave like animals
I was dying laughing and being the only white guy in the room I stayed behind kelly
@Deleted User wait..
You write stories too?!?!
I do. Started with a skyrim screenshot comic. I still do that but I also write other stories.
irl Officers typically have Senior Enlisted advise them @Hackata48
Good to know
I am trying to go for a Officer Green and Sargent Rock dynamic between the two
If you know the Tropes
So uhm guys, if you are curious about the story I am writing in Wattpadd here it is:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/142250328-eodem-a-rifle-and-sword-adventure
I am open to advice and reviews
plus I also lurk in Spacebattles Forums
IDK if any of you guys venture there though
LoL my Profile pic
Fun Fact I own a Crusader Great Helm