Message from @Hackata48

Discord ID: 457152963408953345


2018-06-15 10:22:53 UTC  

put it in ps4

2018-06-15 10:22:55 UTC  

game starts

2018-06-15 10:22:59 UTC  

"Kept ya waiting, huh?"

2018-06-15 10:23:00 UTC  

Elder Scrolls 5 Skyrim

2018-06-15 10:58:41 UTC  

Damned Thalmor

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/444628704296173569/457136861824024576/35241098_10213720190733702_8556125468439347200_n.jpg

2018-06-15 11:08:24 UTC  

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/444628704296173569/457139309674233867/image.gif

2018-06-15 11:43:00 UTC  

Should we tell them?

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/444628704296173569/457148015829057546/35329379_2063317543933763_4354770081327087616_o.jpg

2018-06-15 11:51:47 UTC  

So I am a story writer and I want to ask from you...


What makes a Female Protagonist 'Based'?

2018-06-15 11:58:42 UTC  

>tfw CNN trying to push two opposite narratives at once

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/444628704296173569/457151967488114730/zrika.jpg

2018-06-15 12:00:36 UTC  

hm, sisters of battle from WH40k are pretty based

2018-06-15 12:00:50 UTC  

think on that

2018-06-15 12:00:51 UTC  

Details pls

2018-06-15 12:01:14 UTC  

celibate, purge heretics with holy flames... etc

2018-06-15 12:01:15 UTC  

Well for my story the female Protagonist is a Squad Leader fresh out of Officer School

2018-06-15 12:01:16 UTC  

One thing I can recommend when writing women is don't make her gender a focus point. writers that make them that way are limit the characters.

on the left they will often refuse to make the character look weak to keep up the idea. You character's must be PEOPLE first and women second @Hackata48

2018-06-15 12:01:54 UTC  

Whew! Now that you mentioned it, I never really emphasised my character's gender that much

2018-06-15 12:02:07 UTC  

Tends to be a bit No Nonsense though

2018-06-15 12:02:16 UTC  

have her have a strong sense of morality

2018-06-15 12:02:20 UTC  

not so emotional

2018-06-15 12:02:26 UTC  

and she listens to the advice of an older man who is techninally lower rank than her

2018-06-15 12:02:39 UTC  

She is a Lieutenant while the Older man is a Sarge

2018-06-15 12:02:54 UTC  

Don't make her does things just because she's a women.

2018-06-15 12:03:35 UTC  

but what would make her based... HM

2018-06-15 12:05:46 UTC  

probably giving up her career and being a house wife

2018-06-15 12:08:29 UTC  

@Hackata48
I got two women in my story I write. One is a spy master working behind the scenes and the other is a scared girl who's to powerful for her own good. and doesn't want to be a hero and is trying to get rid of that power. mix up character types for interesting results

The actor Avery Brooks (Sisko from Star Trek DS9) said it best.

If you write a story about a brown man, he'll wake up and say "What brown man thing will I do today" you need to think of the character as a man first. skin color is trivial in comparison.
Same goes for women.

That'd be pretty based @Deleted User

2018-06-15 12:08:45 UTC  

If its okay with everyone here, Can I post my Wattpadd Story in this Discord Server?

2018-06-15 12:09:23 UTC  

lol @Deleted User one of my characters is Black. A Nigerian Engineer

2018-06-15 12:09:33 UTC  

their pretty based if I recall from the news

2018-06-15 12:09:36 UTC  

family based

2018-06-15 12:09:38 UTC  

likes education

2018-06-15 12:09:51 UTC  

I know I Nigerian. They generally are

2018-06-15 12:09:51 UTC  

and some of the famous ones got accepted to ALL Ivy Leagues

2018-06-15 12:10:05 UTC  

He is pretty based.

2018-06-15 12:10:48 UTC  

listening to him argue with African Americans is amazing

2018-06-15 12:12:38 UTC  

You're not Africans... you're Americans. He said as two black guys were talking black panther. Boy did they get angry 😄

2018-06-15 12:13:25 UTC  

The culture you have is sickening to africa, no wonder people hate you. you behave like animals

2018-06-15 12:13:57 UTC  

I was dying laughing and being the only white guy in the room I stayed behind kelly

2018-06-15 12:16:39 UTC  

@Deleted User wait..
You write stories too?!?!

2018-06-15 12:17:48 UTC  

I do. Started with a skyrim screenshot comic. I still do that but I also write other stories.

2018-06-15 12:22:58 UTC  

irl Officers typically have Senior Enlisted advise them @Hackata48

2018-06-15 12:23:22 UTC  

Good to know