Message from @Tal,Karpov,AlekhineAllCoolGuys

Discord ID: 487756591169404928


2018-09-07 22:46:20 UTC  

Don't get me wrong, the Haikus can be good. But most of them don't make any sense at all.

2018-09-07 22:46:20 UTC  

Morgan.wtf

2018-09-07 22:46:30 UTC  

People are like... Seriously, throwing out random words.

2018-09-07 22:46:41 UTC  

You need thought put into a haiku

2018-09-07 22:46:44 UTC  

A LOT

2018-09-07 22:46:58 UTC  

Because every syllable counts

2018-09-07 22:47:32 UTC  

God and Death? By J N T
Dead and torn asunder, the Eastern Beast,
But from the west, wave upon wave of men.
Time ends when this glorious empire’s ceased.
Undying numbers from the ant’s den.
These lives tortured within this mortal plane.
These damned lives not appeased of their agony.
Death born in its eternal bloody reign;
The seas shall not wash this catastrophe.
The Eastern front made of corpses and snow.
My mind annihilated blow by blow;
Truly there is no God, there is no Throne.
A million damned souls tortured alone.
The revolution will never stop death.
It’s the old alive, the young one’s last breath.

2018-09-07 22:47:41 UTC  

It takes a lot to make a poem that tells a story, evokes emotion, and brings the idea to the forefront.

2018-09-07 22:48:01 UTC  

Just a random ww1 poem I made

2018-09-07 22:48:19 UTC  

I usually go with the four sentence format.

2018-09-07 22:48:21 UTC  

Good ones of mine took like 9 hours each to make

2018-09-07 22:48:43 UTC  

I will go write a thing over the weekend

2018-09-07 22:48:46 UTC  

Talks about the incompetence of the high command and how communism is a failed ideology.

2018-09-07 22:48:50 UTC  

Each four sentences form around a topic of a peculiar subject.

2018-09-07 22:49:49 UTC  

But yeah, I am embraced the four sentence format.

2018-09-07 22:49:56 UTC  

@Tal,Karpov,AlekhineAllCoolGuys good message. Good words

2018-09-07 22:50:00 UTC  

Pretty good

2018-09-07 22:50:24 UTC  

I remember when I was small I hated poetry

2018-09-07 22:50:24 UTC  

4-6 beat poems are my specialty

2018-09-07 22:50:30 UTC  

Like in general

2018-09-07 22:50:33 UTC  

@Rouqen how about you

2018-09-07 22:50:40 UTC  

But now I love it

2018-09-07 22:50:44 UTC  

But not in school

2018-09-07 22:50:46 UTC  

Do you follow any format

2018-09-07 22:50:53 UTC  

I never liked or disliked it... just told I have a talent.

2018-09-07 22:50:58 UTC  

That I should nurture.

2018-09-07 22:51:08 UTC  

Usually 4-8 lines in a stranza

2018-09-07 22:51:17 UTC  

Or a straight text poem

2018-09-07 22:51:24 UTC  

I’ve always liked poetry. But not as much as writing long stories

2018-09-07 22:51:37 UTC  

hey

2018-09-07 22:51:39 UTC  

Oh... let me guess, you guys were into Roleplaying?

2018-09-07 22:51:58 UTC  

Rp?

2018-09-07 22:51:59 UTC  

I was heavily into roleplaying a lot as a 13 year old.

2018-09-07 22:52:00 UTC  

Yes.

2018-09-07 22:52:01 UTC  

RP.

2018-09-07 22:52:09 UTC  

If CK2 counts

2018-09-07 22:52:13 UTC  

Yeah

2018-09-07 22:52:18 UTC  

Most of my RPing came from Chatrooms.

2018-09-07 22:52:24 UTC  

Where group of us made a story.

2018-09-07 22:52:25 UTC  

I hated rping always