The extension of the tentacle in the unclean one becomes thicker in the added part. That shouldn't happen.

indeed, i'm going to cut it into shape after it's dried

this is my first sculpting job so it can't be perfect

got any tips for it?

For the painting, I recommend you slightly tint the wash you use in different areas

Slightly changing the color in areas adds a lot

Can you explain it for retards?

yeah she doesn't get it

Tint it in what way kinda deal

Random internet image:

Observe the cheeks are a bit redish

Some other areas, greener

Darker areas should be a bit blueish

yeah, but you see, i'm not nearly as good as you

i can't use the fancy schmancy techniques

That depends on how well you manage watered down paint. You can alter the color of the wash as you apply it

you can also try to add a layer of very watered down paint to add a bit of color to some areas

how bout these

i know i fucked up on the shoulders

The weapons are actually the part that displeases me the most, quite flat

One thing is rusty weapons

Another one, 100% brown ones

completely agree

but these figures tortured me

a lot of stuff went wrong at the start

so i finished em up real quick

For quick finish of some kinds of miniatures, consider chipping medium, or pigments

what would the chipping medium do?

It works this way:

You first paint with a base of rust-color paint

Then you apply a layer of chipping medium (usually with airbrush)

Then you paint with the normal paint

Then you slightly rub with a brush, and bits of paint will chip off

Can you apply chipping medium with a brush as a last resort?

yeah got a broken airbrush

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f2qp6-rGHtM&feature=share

happened during the orks

I don't really know if a brush can be applied

greenstuffworld sells lots of products for having fancy miniatures in a minimal time, that is their audience