Moonman's wording is better for last sentence imo
Use of one verb
"attacked... acts of free speech"
We are a peaceful organization, designed to end
violence from domestic terror groups who have
spread fear worldwide and have attacked many
local businesses, cancelled demonstrations,
and silenced acts of free speech.
i have some pottery i had to make for a project, its about brotherhood in america if one of you would like to work with it and make it more for anticom
The sons of man play heartingly by a hearth with their toys.
As the fire grows ever brighter and more is revealed they grow envious of the others.
Thus begins the everlasting fight where brother hurts brother to fight for the toy of the other.
The one who notices his possession is material and gives it over in kindness upon his own behalf.
Rather, he, unlike the other will not upset lady Columbia.
The one who fights must bother not America with his unbrotherly chaff.
For their nation America unlike any other lights the fire ever brighter.
Along the street two brothers meet, one poor, struggling with personal fights and at a low, the other takes him in.
Sooner would North Korea be a bastion of freedom than the poor one to let himself beg at his feet.
For him to live life in strangers suite made him think of the other pedestrians who would just walk by.
For they are but men made of lies.
And men of lies they will be till the day they die.
It is the duty of the righteous to care for their brethren, more so than they care for themselves.
For the selfish man all that he tells as lies he claims as truth, and all that is truth to him are lies.
That man is truly blind, for even the blind man can see the evil in his words and in his actions that he dares to do.
In the eyes of America that life is the foundation of the land.
Yet in the eyes of a liar the righteous life is abstruse.
For those men who cherish brotherhood a heav’n born band shall play for them at St. Peter's portal.
We are a peaceful organization,
designed to protect businesses, demonstrations and speaking events
from violent domestic terror groups who have spread fear and intimidation
amongst law abiding citizens
my 2 cents
some of it seems forced because it was a requirement
pottery? or poetry? lol
pottery is the dank may-may way of saying poetry
maybe "devoted to"
Antifa is "designed" by shady NGOs
devoted is good
@Cœur de Lion I'm trying yours but I dont want to drop "attacked", "cancelled", and "silenced"
We are a peaceful organization, devoted to protect
communities from domestic terror groups who have
spread fear and intimidation worldwide and have
attacked local businesses, cancelled demonstrations,
and silenced acts of free speech.
yep I mean just maybe try and switch "end violence" which sounds kinda violent in and of itself with "protect from"
yeah thats good
"devoted to protecting"*
Let's get the full text again with the fixed @Anticom LR#9355
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Save your country's innocent people
and free speech from communist terrorists!
Protect your state's citizens and
help rebuild businesses from terrorism!
Begin serving your community in peace today!
Join now at anticom.us.
We are a peaceful organization, devoted to
protecting communities from domestic terror
groups who have spread fear and intimidation
worldwide and have attacked local businesses,
cancelled demonstrations, and silenced acts
of free speech.
We are made in the name of free speech and
the protection of innocent civillians.
Begin community service to those you love.
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