Message from @ShadowNymph
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Sketch
Friendly floofer here to say hi
Book boi
He don't give a hoot
XD lmao
I drew an island
whoa nice
Nice art @ShadowNymph
oh crap
I forgot to do something for her eyes rip
Could someone please critique this?
really damn good
(all i can say)
people are only going to focus on the shading, keep adding details or it will look messy and trashy
@Mari#6008 ok let's fist start with anatomy, I can pick out a few things and I can suggest doing a study. Anatomy 1, your shoulders are slopes, this can make your drawings look very sloppy and uncomfortable. You can fix this by drawing out and then down instead of drawing down from the start. Also don't forget the the average person has a shoulder width of 3 of there heads across, meaning you should be able to fit one of your heads next to your main head and the shoulder should be as wide as it. A 2, your arms don't exist... either your line for your arms are to far in or they are completely gone I can't see them at all. People tend to have a little loop and a skin fold where there armpit comes in contact with the torso. A 3, your lines for the neck are unnerving, most people don't have straight (or semistraight) lines going down their neck. As my art teacher likes to say "their are no lines in nature". Most people have a simple dip where the shadows fall. A 4, your chest is ok but it is to small and squished. The 3 heads across trick should help this. Your breasts are good. Ok I have a couple things for technical work too. Please don't use smudging for shading, it looks sloppy and it is very hard to get up with your eraser because your oils have mixed with the graphite and have made it sink in and stick to the paper. Your feathery lines also tell me that you are not the most confident but this can be worked on by just continuing to draw, so don't give up! For now just try and simplify all your lines into one (trust me I am feathery too and it makes the drawing not as confusing). Ok I'm done with my critique thanks you for reading!
Ah thank you!
I tried looking at a ref for the pose but, I normally shade like that, I have for a few years, so I see I kinda need to work on that 😂, thank you for your help though @❄Holijinx❄!
Abandoning smudge shading is less intimidating than I initially had thought starting out. Much more precise to alternate between soft pressing and hard pressing the pencil, and having different gauge pencils to swap between.
got bored doing homework n put too much time into this
It's niiiiice
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Awesome