Really a costume should fit the character and without knowing much about them it's hard to say. I personally don't like the lines from the crotch down the leg. I'd leave it bare or put the hexagons on the hips and have it down down the side.

@Kaileigh Blue I like that, I can try doing that in a sec

as for personality, she's very quite arrogant and egocentric, but the thing that's most visible in her behavior is an extreme level of sadism.

She wants the entire world to feel her pain, as she likes to say.

My portfolio website https://jvahn.github.io/

You can play my games on it too

https://jvahn.github.io/bridgewalk.html

https://jvahn.github.io/lostparadigm.html

@Timeward not enough sharp edges and grim motifs.

Needs some skulls, claws, reapers, scythes, etc.

Cute yet kinda sad

Thats cute

I've never been good with colored pencil, but I can definitely do greyscale

These are commissions for a steampunk universe I run 😄

Lewis gun and Mauser Broomhandle.

Warhammer 40k Steampunk?

The lewis has been modified with a different calibre in this case

Ah, cool.

As to that one of the factions is related to dieselpunk so there was some Imperium elements in it

Kek.

Wouldn't dieselpunk imply oil-fired boilers, and thus little smoke from the stacks?

Cos that there's coal smoke.

Depends on which variety you go with, some go the complete opposite direction for the grit and grime

Eh. Oil is far more efficient than coal; the decrease in smoke is an ancillary benefit.

But yeah, Rule of Cool being a thing...

*nods* That would be the issue there.