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I always see it when you already started
Damn
is it bad that my chapters aren't consistent in their length?
There's some that are only 8-10 pages and then there's a huge one that's 40 pages
Uh 40 pages might be a little long XD
it's still all the same topic though, same batch of events
Can you split the events into three chapter?
Most chapters range from 6 - 14 pages
I can split it in two
I think that will work
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Question for anyone:
What would your response be if your cousin disappeared one day wearing a certain outfit and you found his body four days later badly mutilated by dragons (you can't recognize his face) but wearing a completely different outfit and when you go check his room you don't find either one of those outfits in his closet but some of his other things are missing, namely spellbooks. No one has gone in that room besides his mother and she didn't take anything out. Note: there would be no feasible reason for your cousin to have hidden clothes in the woods, and nobody saw him come back to change. Both outfits were indeed his.
What would you assume happened?
asking because I'm trying to figure out a reasonable reaction for a character who experiences this and I want to see how easy it is for anyone to piece together and if I should make what happened a little more obvious
To be honest, I'd say he snuck back in for a change of clothes because his first set got stolen
Tbf, I wouldnt assume anything. I would be like we need to get to the bottom of wtf is going on here.
yeah wtf is my first reaction
Okay, that was my characters first reaction too but I'm trying to figure out how she would figure out what happened next
I generally am not an assume kind of person. I start gathering information before anything. So
From what's above, if that's all I know, I wouldnt have enough information to determine what happened.
trace back the steps of his cousin
Oh! that actually fits perfectly
like from the murder scene
trace the steps, see if anyone saw where he went/where he came from, who he was with, etc
I just needed her to go the spot where they found his body, so I guess it's not important that she knows exactly what happened yet
Do you guys want to know what actually happened?
up to you
seduced by a demon?
Someone faked his death and he's still alive
that's one of the wtf moments and why I said the MC needs to trace his steps
okay
but that's an interesting twist
@MofoDoggo I did split the chapters but I don't wanna repost what's basically the same thing.
hopefully it all goes well
The safest suggestion would be to investigate, but at the same time to have grief as they did just die.
Fair enough