I figured i sidetracked at times. Thank you very much for this criticism!! Maybe I can try to rewrite and reword things and show you guys for feedback

I just wish I had more time

Dbel quoting one of the greatest minds of all time :)

With essays like these I can’t stop and think

I take like 5 minutes to choose my evidence in my head then begin

Kks!!

If I typed it I’d be done with min red to spare

Minutes*

Also I think your paper should be on why acceptance is overrated and how veil of inclusion is making it that way.

Keep a copy of the original incase the new one isn't as good :)

Also submit both always submit everything :)

I did this to teachers I didn't like.... I would submit 2 to 4 different papers on the same subject with all editing and draft pieces.

Then if they marked something other than grammar or spelling I would dispute it as hard as I could until my grade was raised or the principal/director got involved

Who also happened to take a few ideas from others (allegedly)

that is all famous academics.... almost all of them bounced ideas off other intellectuals

Yeah but if you don’t reference them it’s an issue

lol how many college thesis have you seen that give all credit where credit is due? not one

I think it has something to do with standardized testing..?

idrk. I just know I have always hated common core assignments

All mine have given credit so that’s like 8 minor ones

eh I bet more than a few of them bounced an idea or something off a friend and didn't give the friend credit

Common core is a different way of teaching things that is focused on making everyone know the exact same methods

Pretty true lol

so can we REALLY call what Einstein did stealing without any proof that he actually STOLE from others?

but I digress 😄

That’s why I said allegedly

I came to help @𝒫𝓇ℯ𝓈𝒾𝒹ℯ𝓃𝓉 with a short essay 😄

Hey don’t shh me

I’m right

Ew

🤫

cringe.

thx man

For real though, don’t shh me please

Im cringing so hard rn. I hate this. <:Ben_Cringe:752572527120875520>

I know right

fine fine I was having a bit of fun but yes you are correct 😛 I was being nit picky 😄

I didn’t mean to be like that, you know, just a bit short now cause heart pain set in a little bit, I’m sorry

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