ye

But this makes me think of the set up for the Yu Yu Hakusho dark tournament

Never even seen Yu Yu Hakusho

cause it was p much set up with different divisions like this

so I wouldn't know

Just saying, that's pretty much what I expected to see when tournament with different divisions was mentioned lmao

true.

I think I'll just remove it completely.

I can't think of any good reason to keep it

Hey, I know this is unrelated but would y'all be interested in checking out my wip? It's a Marvel fanfiction centered around Bucky and a Hydra agent OC. It's pretty much pg so far, there's some violence but that's it.

Here's the link if any of y'all are interested https://docs.google.com/document/d/17417qjcZyPpskOwaMwETPnVLAzeAi0bxbSxEobjQ_vM/edit?usp=drivesdk

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ermagurd

Marvel! AND Montana?!

COUNT ME IN

Nova is a female ? 🤔

Yea, it's a code name

oh

I'm not sure if I've made that clear in the story itself lol

I thought it was like the Superhero Nova

Oh, no

Not that guy

I’m in a writing mood, who wants to race?

It's only Montana for that part, I don't personally know what it's like there

Montana is coolio. Great Falls? Eh its okay, but Montana on the wester and norther side, is nice

Actually I need help with something

Lol, I forgot I actually chose a real place

I thought I made something up

Anyway I've gtg

I hope you enjoy what I have so far

what do y ou need help with?

It's undergoing editing rn bc I just got a Beta reader

Imma reading it, but I scrolled down ahead of time, and noticed, you already ended the first Chapter? That's a bit short for a first chapter, especially since some of that before hand is a Prologue.....

Then again, that's just me.

I'm really bad at long chapters 😅

But it's just a first draft, I might add more or combine chapters in the future

fair enough, but don't ever to not try. I always try to find ways to make it longer without dragging stuff out

Yeah for sure. Thanks for the advice. I've really gtg though

kk, bye.

Hmm, thinking in the terms of the Roman empire infantry. Starting with Legate going down, with smaller ranks. I'm looking for a name for the rank that commands around a century in terms.

well now that I've scrapped my whole tournament arc, I gotta come up with what the hell am I gonna fill the rest of chapter fifty with.

*the original point of it was to make a certain character feel strong again, repurposed, and help develop another character, but that wasn't good enough for this out of the blue tournament*