Message from @A Person

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2020-09-19 23:01:52 UTC  

there are like 80 human ships left

2020-09-19 23:02:15 UTC  

and no more can be launched until the debris around earth is cleared up because most ships are made in earth

2020-09-19 23:02:28 UTC  

the ships get together and make a surprise strike

2020-09-19 23:02:51 UTC  

I dont know much past that

2020-09-19 23:03:06 UTC  

Sounds like a decent framework.

2020-09-19 23:03:08 UTC  

I was thinking about having some religious aspect for the aliens

2020-09-19 23:03:19 UTC  

Other colonies on both sides?

2020-09-19 23:03:22 UTC  

like there is some sort of artifact on the rogue planet

2020-09-19 23:03:24 UTC  

yeah

2020-09-19 23:03:33 UTC  

lots of colonies and allied alien species

2020-09-19 23:03:45 UTC  

like earth is allied with aliens from nearby systems

2020-09-19 23:04:01 UTC  

Okay. Then it gets more complicated.

2020-09-19 23:04:20 UTC  

yeah

2020-09-19 23:04:40 UTC  

You have to detail out the other races, plus why they're allied with Earth, and why they're not competing along with the TRAPPIST.

2020-09-19 23:05:28 UTC  

good idea

2020-09-19 23:05:41 UTC  

I was thinking of the nearby species being more human like

2020-09-19 23:05:54 UTC  

the TRAPPIST species are bug like aliens

2020-09-19 23:06:11 UTC  

Unless you're going Trek-style, even humanoid aliens are still aliens.

2020-09-19 23:06:16 UTC  

yeah

2020-09-19 23:06:32 UTC  

I was thinking humanoid aliens were more sangheli like

2020-09-19 23:06:41 UTC  

sangheli from Halo

2020-09-19 23:06:53 UTC  

I've never played Halo.

2020-09-19 23:07:07 UTC  

ohh ok

2020-09-19 23:07:29 UTC  

that

2020-09-19 23:07:29 UTC  

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/738823664346333234/757015035674361877/unknown.png

2020-09-19 23:07:41 UTC  

sort of reptilian allies

2020-09-19 23:07:58 UTC  

explained through exogenesis

2020-09-19 23:08:33 UTC  

the TRAPPIST species evolved on a hot planet, therefore the bug-like body

2020-09-19 23:09:32 UTC  

Okay. Here's the hurdles:

2020-09-19 23:10:05 UTC  

You'll have to postulate why the allied races don't have their own ships, or why they're not available.

2020-09-19 23:10:17 UTC  

they have their own ships too

2020-09-19 23:10:28 UTC  

they dont have many

2020-09-19 23:10:38 UTC  

they're less advanced than humanity

2020-09-19 23:10:56 UTC  

Also describe how being cut off from Earth affects the relations, because other than just being friendly, they need a realistic reason to be allies. Trade, mutual defense, etc.

2020-09-19 23:11:12 UTC  

good idea

2020-09-19 23:11:30 UTC  

this takes place around 4000 AD

2020-09-19 23:11:36 UTC  

so far future

2020-09-19 23:12:10 UTC  

Since they have their own ships, there has to be a reason why they can't bolster the Earth fleet. Refits from the war, a simultaneous strike that hit them, etc.

2020-09-19 23:12:26 UTC  

They do help the human fleet

2020-09-19 23:12:33 UTC  

they have worse industry than humanity

2020-09-19 23:12:48 UTC  

so the other 2-3 alien races only supply about 40 ships