Message from @DishonoredRonin

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2020-09-19 23:15:01 UTC  

Are you planning on doing it ship scale, fleet scale, or grand scale?

2020-09-19 23:15:12 UTC  

fleet scale

2020-09-19 23:15:19 UTC  

basically focusing on one person

2020-09-19 23:15:31 UTC  

who enlisted in the navy

2020-09-19 23:15:31 UTC  

Okay, that's more ship scale.

2020-09-19 23:15:34 UTC  

yeah

2020-09-19 23:15:45 UTC  

Battlestar Galactica was mostly ship scale.

2020-09-19 23:15:51 UTC  

okay yeah

2020-09-19 23:15:56 UTC  

then ship scale

2020-09-19 23:16:04 UTC  

its hard to do a good grand scale

2020-09-19 23:16:13 UTC  

Very. LOL

2020-09-19 23:16:14 UTC  

because you dont get to know anyone

2020-09-19 23:16:34 UTC  

basically the main character is the leader of the fleet

2020-09-19 23:16:39 UTC  

I started slow in my own main universe, then expanded from there until it was huge.

2020-09-19 23:16:47 UTC  

nice

2020-09-19 23:17:09 UTC  

I find it easier to do a single story on one person

2020-09-19 23:17:17 UTC  

then do another in the same universe

2020-09-19 23:17:21 UTC  

on a different person

2020-09-19 23:17:34 UTC  

Works well to a point, yep.

2020-09-19 23:17:41 UTC  

not too far, yeah

2020-09-19 23:18:21 UTC  

But I think you have the basics laid out okay, it's getting into the details that'll take the most work.

2020-09-19 23:18:27 UTC  

definitely

2020-09-19 23:18:54 UTC  

would you mind sending me one of your novels? grand scale sci fi sounds interestering

2020-09-19 23:19:28 UTC  

I'm still working on the first full novel. I ran with short stories up until now.

2020-09-19 23:19:36 UTC  

oh ok

2020-09-19 23:19:45 UTC  

I tried and failed with the first draft

2020-09-19 23:19:49 UTC  

70 pages of crap

2020-09-19 23:19:57 UTC  

now I'm completely restarting

2020-09-19 23:20:05 UTC  

basically the same core concept

2020-09-19 23:20:16 UTC  

You'll always be rewriting first drafts.

2020-09-19 23:20:19 UTC  

but other than the rogue planet everything is different

2020-09-19 23:20:20 UTC  

yeah

2020-09-19 23:21:35 UTC  

If you reach a point where you decide to change everything, don't be afraid to keep the parts you like and rewrite around them.

2020-09-19 23:21:58 UTC  

good idea

2020-09-19 23:22:19 UTC  

Niven and Pournelle literally rewrote an entire chunk of The Mote In God's Eye for one kickass line.

2020-09-19 23:22:38 UTC  

thanks for all the help. Mind if I send you the draft in a few weeks?

2020-09-19 23:22:54 UTC  

wont be done

2020-09-19 23:22:57 UTC  

just the first part

2020-09-19 23:23:14 UTC  

Also, Larry Niven's "Known Space" stuff is a good way to get a handle on introing worlds and races easily.

2020-09-19 23:23:19 UTC  

Sure!

2020-09-19 23:23:22 UTC  

thanks