Can't we just eat 1/3rd?

Feed the third world population to the second world ones

good review for a sell

Gets two birds stoned at once

good product review, will make many people interested

Best to just dump them in the Indian ocean

Goatcraft has a certain novelty value

it really is well equippe

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to be an artistic statement in the modern era

you're lucky

Post modern era

there is no second world @custer

Modern era in art ended

its an after the fact construction by some people

but never caught on

Did you like the new track?

excuse me?

@fallot mexico is 2nd world while Britain is 3rd world atp

Sorry multitasking

yes I did like what you linked me

maybe it needed one little extra bit of focus

but its original sounding, good

I think as the melody comes in in the beginning, there is no hook

expectation cannot be generated from those chords

the most barebones motif would fix that, even just slight changes in timing possibly

I think throwing backing keys will render it complete

To fill the voids

It needs a bass drop.

yeah

backing keys may do it, I don't know what you plan for them

The song increases in tempo as it progresses

When the main melody is reintroduced, it's faster each time

With the left hand playing different variations on the lower registers

How many times have you listened to it?

I've listened to it twice

It's still raw, I haven't mastered it

After I do the backing keys, I'll master it

CREATE A DEICIDE/NOCTURNUS HYBRID!

I really hate my job.

I work as a clerk/payment processor for a fundraising group for several charities and the fundraising group is horrible.