Message from @Homu H.

Discord ID: 289304895184568320


2017-03-09 07:50:48 UTC  

when ur lungs went to poo

2017-03-09 07:51:16 UTC  

cause i wheeze when i inhale sometimes and apparently thats bad

2017-03-09 07:51:34 UTC  

No, I was just coughing out nasty stuffs. It was during my last month of school + the first month of being in my new apartment.

2017-03-09 07:51:50 UTC  

wonder if im dying

2017-03-09 07:51:52 UTC  

oh well

2017-03-09 07:52:08 UTC  

if so i had a great run

2017-03-09 07:52:42 UTC  

Maybe if you were vomitting blood / pissing blood / shitting blood / fainting and stuff.

2017-03-09 07:52:47 UTC  

Fuck

2017-03-09 07:52:50 UTC  

i'm having

2017-03-09 07:52:57 UTC  

a super hard time with the intro alone

2017-03-09 07:52:57 UTC  

no blood

2017-03-09 07:53:02 UTC  

must be fine

2017-03-09 07:53:06 UTC  

I'm not sure what to put in it

2017-03-09 07:53:12 UTC  

What do you have so far?

2017-03-09 07:53:23 UTC  

"Masuji Ibuse’s “Carp” is a short story about our narrator Ibuse, his deceased friend Aoki Nampachi, a white carp, and an unmistakable friendship. Throughout the story, Ibuse presents the carp in a symbolical way the help drive the theme of friendship forward throughout the story. "

2017-03-09 07:53:28 UTC  

"*my names homu this is my intro*"

2017-03-09 07:53:36 UTC  

I can't include biographical info or a summary of the story

2017-03-09 07:53:55 UTC  

Yeah, that'd be for a main topic.

2017-03-09 07:53:59 UTC  

"*what i learned in boating school today ISSSS-*"

2017-03-09 07:54:08 UTC  

no i mean at all in the essay

2017-03-09 07:54:22 UTC  

but yeah I have two sentences now

2017-03-09 07:54:30 UTC  

what else should i say in it

2017-03-09 07:54:35 UTC  

im fucking dead tbh

2017-03-09 07:54:48 UTC  

Only three or four sentences should suffice.

2017-03-09 07:54:51 UTC  

id help but i have the mental capacity of a walnut

2017-03-09 07:54:52 UTC  

so

2017-03-09 07:55:03 UTC  

tbh im a goood writer

2017-03-09 07:55:14 UTC  

just not on the topic of conversation

2017-03-09 07:55:19 UTC  

as of rn

2017-03-09 07:55:38 UTC  

Word limit?

2017-03-09 07:56:17 UTC  

As well as being about friendship, it equally tells a tale of loneliness through the eyes of the narrator as he tries to move on from the death of his beloved friend."

2017-03-09 07:56:18 UTC  

update

2017-03-09 07:56:24 UTC  

also 3-5 pages

2017-03-09 07:57:40 UTC  

lol rip

2017-03-09 07:57:51 UTC  

its 2am

2017-03-09 07:57:55 UTC  

ur fkn ded

2017-03-09 07:58:12 UTC  

I may be wrong (as I type in the manner that I speak, instead of 100% accurate English,) but isn't there supposed to be a comma in there before their names?

"Our narrator, Ibuse,"

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2017-03-09 07:58:39 UTC  

just copy and paste the whole essay

2017-03-09 07:58:40 UTC  

I didn't include it in the case it'd appear as two people

2017-03-09 07:58:42 UTC  

like

2017-03-09 07:58:46 UTC  

then paraphrase