Finished a commission

My first attempt at a meme

Go 049 you know the cure.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pWukfiGlnik

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=haFDHbNUBwQ

tyty

I require criticism

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ix9qY6BY6L4

wait does any art count here?

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oh, sorry

feel free to remove them

photography is art ur good

i was just asking cuz i want some critique on a project later today

That photo has been going around a lot. I'd be surprised if Tau was the photographer.

This is for stuff you personally created. Not sharing stuff you found.

ah ok

Purpose is for people to show off their creations and get some feedback

Well then

I posted art and was completely ignored because of some guy with kekistan flags

>:(

that's just the internet my guy

I shall do a repost then

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ix9qY6BY6L4

criticism?

overall good, but there seems to be too much happening at once

maybe playing with the saund levels of some of the effects to balance all the noise would do some good to improve it

still though, well done

thanks

ill post some of my art soon if i have time

what noise do you mean exactly?

you mean the tardis takeoff sound at the beginning?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=19I9bnWjmkQ

that weird *lulululululu* sound

i can only describe it as "sparkles"

Oh that?

Thats a part of the music

Cant do anything about that

you cant turn it down a tad or anything?