Message from @Orchid

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2017-11-01 21:19:59 UTC  

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2017-11-01 22:12:58 UTC  

looking forward to see the police response

2017-11-01 22:13:07 UTC  

hopefully lots of BLM violent rioters as well

2017-11-01 22:27:43 UTC  

I hope so, I hope one of hem spazzes out and gives the police the go-ahead to crack down hard. It's all Trump needs to ban antifa once and for all if nothing else.

2017-11-01 22:27:50 UTC  

*one of them

2017-11-01 23:22:24 UTC  

Inb4 police state and both left and right put on lists

2017-11-01 23:24:41 UTC  

>implying we're all not already on lists

2017-11-01 23:32:57 UTC  

Put on the kill list 🤔

2017-11-01 23:34:47 UTC  

There will ne no police response

2017-11-02 00:09:10 UTC  

If the police don't respond to mobs blocking traffic for days and possibly doing worse (blm-tier looting and antifa-tier vandalism), they're pretty much asking for vigilante responses from the citizens of the affected cities. Good luck controlling that if the police choose to stand by and do nothing.

2017-11-02 00:17:07 UTC  

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2017-11-02 00:17:19 UTC  

🤔

2017-11-02 00:18:02 UTC  

It must be toxic masculinity

2017-11-02 00:29:49 UTC  

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2017-11-02 00:30:20 UTC  

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2017-11-02 00:31:31 UTC  

(((spooky)))

2017-11-02 01:13:09 UTC  

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2017-11-02 01:13:44 UTC  

lol I'm literally shaking

2017-11-02 01:16:24 UTC  

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2017-11-02 01:39:30 UTC  

may have some gunmen of peace in colorado

2017-11-02 01:39:43 UTC  

delivering peace pellets at high speed

2017-11-02 01:40:00 UTC  

Tfw phones about to die and im on standby for 9 hours

2017-11-02 01:40:49 UTC  

WAKE ME UP INSIDE

2017-11-02 01:42:10 UTC  

SAVE ME

2017-11-02 01:42:43 UTC  

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2017-11-02 01:45:03 UTC  

someone snapped a photo of the guy!

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2017-11-02 01:59:42 UTC  

HE CANT KEEP

2017-11-02 02:00:35 UTC  

GETTING

2017-11-02 02:06:14 UTC  

AWAY

2017-11-02 02:11:58 UTC  

WITH

2017-11-02 02:43:00 UTC  

IT

2017-11-02 03:21:48 UTC  

At burkly and other events people get hurt and police just watch, and when they try to get through the police to safety the police stop them and tell them to go a diffrent way

2017-11-02 06:10:20 UTC  

@StaysafeTV - 191 lb Muscle Man So I just watched your video posted in self improvement, would you like my thoughts on it as far as editing and the like goes?

2017-11-02 06:19:19 UTC  

@Nix yes please !

2017-11-02 06:40:14 UTC  

Sorry! Late-ish dinner for me. Let me get on this...
So, please do keep in mind I'm no professional? These are just mostly things I noticed.

2017-11-02 06:42:31 UTC  

One, the music was a biiit loud. Especially when the violins would start to get faster&louder (crescendo?), they could be distracting, and a few times in the video I was more focused on the music than what you were saying. Not to say I didn't like the music-- certainly a nice change from the other rap/electric of a lot of other similar channels, but it could be distracting. Perhaps use a sort of sound equalizer, or move the peaks of music to the more activity-focused parts?

2017-11-02 06:45:49 UTC  

Two, and on a similar note, when you weren't talking and instead had just shots of (I mean, I should assume) you working out, it was a little weird for me. I'm much more used to swelling outtro music, or music to fill the gaps between talking, but it seemed a bit uncoordinated. So, assuming you still go with the classical stuff, perhaps time the crescendoes with the working-out footage. It'll give the activity a more, uh, dramatic? Epic? feel, while still keeping the focus on you, both talking and performing the activity. I know it'll probably be hard to find music that matches up _perfectly_ with that, but there should be something to match them a little closer.

2017-11-02 06:49:00 UTC  

And, if that's not a thing that works, perhaps try putting voiceover on the workout vids. As it stands, it's something between vloggy and fitblog, which while the vlog would be fine for intro/outtro, it again seems somewhat disjointed to have there be face/notface segments in such a short video. I know you mentioned it was a shorter-than-others video, but usually cuts between face is used for steps, or distinct segments. Perhaps that'll change in the longer videos, but as a first impression from the first video I've seen of yours, that's just how it came off.

2017-11-02 06:49:57 UTC  

Editing, sound/camera quality, etc was all nice for a small channel, not much to say on that other than it works.

2017-11-02 06:50:55 UTC  

I did notice the camera wobbled while you were at the gym-- was someone holding that for you? Perhaps invest in a small tripod, that way if a gym buddy can't make it, there's still a setup, and it'll also seem more stable and professional.

2017-11-02 06:52:45 UTC  

The last thing would be the script. I don't know if you chose it as the "style", but another reason it came off as an odd mix of vlog and fitvid was how it seemed semi-scripted. There was human error, not edited out, and it seemed very genuine, but the "I have thought a whole ton about this" style of genuine. It's charming, in its own way. Not sure if that's what you're going for, but it's how it seemed.