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Check it out!
https://www.doomedscholarstudios.com/projects-6
Sort of. It's a conservative entertainment company putting up the first couple of pages of their graphic novel.
The article below isn't news to people who have been paying attention, but now the news agencies are paying attention. 🙄
https://www.spiked-online.com/2021/03/01/kazuo-ishiguro-is-right-cancel-culture-kills-creativity/?fbclid=IwAR3-oEdIiVtVH_-8at9iNbmnRyfnKo4Pi-RPOH2c6sB0a_YugeZZrRek6rs
For all the *Star Wars Rebels* fans here:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=dqBHPhkUNCI
This is good. I wouldn't change substance; the only thing you need to work on is the grammar. Periods, commas, capital letters, etc.
Also, when characters address each other in dialogue, their names are typically set off from the rest of the sentence with a comma or two. (Example 1: "Thank you, Matilda. That's very kind of you." Example 2: "I know what he said, Joseph, but I don't understand what he *means.*")
"Sir" is usually marked off by a comma, too. "Thank you, sir." "Yes I do, sir." "What do you mean, sir?" You can leave the comma out for "no sir, yes sir," but otherwise it's best to keep it in.
Hope this helps!
You're welcome. 😃
!p no fear in love sarah kroger
Don't know if anyone is interested in this, but here are two open anthology calls. The first one open March 15 and closes May 15 (dates aren't included - or weren't, when I last looked). Just thought I would pass it along: https://www.cedarwrites.com/sanderley-studios/?fbclid=IwAR1re9Tq_EYvarujffytyT7iQDqokNS3P0_8ASnyc0dob9l-m5Qt9gH9qZo
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