There’s my cat in the fall, if anyone wants to see

Here’s a pretty neat sunset

I have a black cat, too. But he doesn’t like planning things as much as he likes running away from terrifying treats being placed in front of him

It looks really good! Why do you feel unsatisfied with the ending? I know it’s a stupid question and you probably know why, but sometimes I find it helps to ask why I’m not satisfied with something or don’t feel it’s good enough. Personally, I feel it might be that the ending doesn’t seem to fit in with the rest of the poem, but that’s just me.

I feel like they’re pretty similar themes. As long as it’s not something really off of what the poem has said or conveyed so far, I think it can fit. But yeah, I would play around with the possibilities

I once saw a hawk or eagle trying sit on the wire coming from my house. He flapped around for a few minutes, obviously unable to keep valence because he was too big