Message from Bluesy in Anticom #general


2017-02-06 07:12:24 UTC  

"We are a peaceful organization, designed to end violence from domestic terror groups who have spread fear worldwide and have attacked many local businesses, demonstrations, and acts of free speech."

2017-02-06 07:12:34 UTC  

@OneLessRed - TN The power of an English Teacher huh?

2017-02-06 07:12:42 UTC  

We are a peaceful organization, designed to end
violence from domestic terror groups who have
spread fear worldwide and have destroyed many
local businesses, cancelled demonstrations,
and silenced acts of free speech.

2017-02-06 07:12:59 UTC  

Moonman's wording is better for last sentence imo

2017-02-06 07:13:07 UTC  

Use of one verb

2017-02-06 07:13:11 UTC  

Which

2017-02-06 07:13:17 UTC  

Attacked?

2017-02-06 07:13:17 UTC  

@MONARCH very nice

2017-02-06 07:13:19 UTC  

@Anticom LR much better, just get rid of the violence

2017-02-06 07:13:27 UTC  

@Moonman thanks

2017-02-06 07:13:30 UTC  

"attacked... acts of free speech"

2017-02-06 07:14:06 UTC  

@MONARCH Not mentioning Antifa as suggested

2017-02-06 07:14:11 UTC  

@trngl thanks, bud

2017-02-06 07:14:16 UTC  

We are a peaceful organization, designed to end
violence from domestic terror groups who have
spread fear worldwide and have attacked many
local businesses, cancelled demonstrations,
and silenced acts of free speech.

2017-02-06 07:14:18 UTC  

i have some pottery i had to make for a project, its about brotherhood in america if one of you would like to work with it and make it more for anticom

2017-02-06 07:14:28 UTC  

The sons of man play heartingly by a hearth with their toys.
As the fire grows ever brighter and more is revealed they grow envious of the others.
Thus begins the everlasting fight where brother hurts brother to fight for the toy of the other.
The one who notices his possession is material and gives it over in kindness upon his own behalf.
Rather, he, unlike the other will not upset lady Columbia.
The one who fights must bother not America with his unbrotherly chaff.

For their nation America unlike any other lights the fire ever brighter.
Along the street two brothers meet, one poor, struggling with personal fights and at a low, the other takes him in.
Sooner would North Korea be a bastion of freedom than the poor one to let himself beg at his feet.
For him to live life in strangers suite made him think of the other pedestrians who would just walk by.
For they are but men made of lies.
And men of lies they will be till the day they die.

It is the duty of the righteous to care for their brethren, more so than they care for themselves.
For the selfish man all that he tells as lies he claims as truth, and all that is truth to him are lies.
That man is truly blind, for even the blind man can see the evil in his words and in his actions that he dares to do.
In the eyes of America that life is the foundation of the land.
Yet in the eyes of a liar the righteous life is abstruse.
For those men who cherish brotherhood a heav’n born band shall play for them at St. Peter's portal.

2017-02-06 07:14:32 UTC  

We are a peaceful organization,
designed to protect businesses, demonstrations and speaking events
from violent domestic terror groups who have spread fear and intimidation
amongst law abiding citizens

my 2 cents

2017-02-06 07:14:41 UTC  

some of it seems forced because it was a requirement

2017-02-06 07:14:46 UTC  

pottery? or poetry? lol

2017-02-06 07:14:55 UTC  

@Cœur de Lion I like that

2017-02-06 07:15:02 UTC  

pottery is the dank may-may way of saying poetry

2017-02-06 07:15:08 UTC  

just fucking with you @Bluesy

2017-02-06 07:15:09 UTC  
2017-02-06 07:15:15 UTC  

Drop "designed"

2017-02-06 07:15:25 UTC  

maybe "devoted to"

2017-02-06 07:15:30 UTC  

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/276935978369810432/278061093341888512/08b.jpg

2017-02-06 07:15:43 UTC  

@trngl I second that

2017-02-06 07:15:47 UTC  

Antifa is "designed" by shady NGOs

2017-02-06 07:15:49 UTC  

Brb I'm gonna work on @Bluesy poetry

2017-02-06 07:15:52 UTC  

devoted is good

2017-02-06 07:16:20 UTC  

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/276935978369810432/278061302952493056/mqW18V7.jpeg

2017-02-06 07:16:35 UTC  

@Cœur de Lion I'm trying yours but I dont want to drop "attacked", "cancelled", and "silenced"

2017-02-06 07:17:04 UTC  

We are a peaceful organization, devoted to protect
communities from domestic terror groups who have
spread fear and intimidation worldwide and have
attacked local businesses, cancelled demonstrations,
and silenced acts of free speech.

2017-02-06 07:17:15 UTC  

yep I mean just maybe try and switch "end violence" which sounds kinda violent in and of itself with "protect from"

2017-02-06 07:17:30 UTC  

yeah thats good

2017-02-06 07:17:34 UTC  

"devoted to protecting"*

2017-02-06 07:17:42 UTC  

right, gotcha

2017-02-06 07:17:50 UTC  

@trngl very good

2017-02-06 07:18:06 UTC  

Let's get the full text again with the fixed @Anticom LR#9355